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It is quite important to recycle waste product in an environment-friendly manner, yet many countries fail to do this practice.

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It is quite important to recycle waste product in an environment-friendly manner, yet many countries fail to do this practice. In this essay, I will explore the reasons behind this issue and suggest possible solutions. One of the main reasons why people do not recycle is the lack of education on this topic. Schools do not teach enough about the importance of recycling used materials. Also, parents do not teach their children good habits like separating plastics, glass and paper before they are thrown away. Children continue this behaviour in adulthood. One solution to this could be to include a chapter related to this topic in the school curriculum so that citizens become responsible at an early age. For instance, South Korea has mandatory environmental awareness classes in the primary schools which had a huge impact on recycling. Another cause of this issue is that many cities have limited facilities for recycling. By this I mean, the bins with different compartments for reusable materials. In many cities around the world, these are hard to find and often poorly utilised. To address these problems governments could invest in providing easy-to-understand recycling stations which has clear guidance for people to follow. This would encourage citizens to recycle more. The recycling rate of my city significantly increased after the municipality put these kinds of bins on the streets. In conclusion, there are many reasons for peoples' bad recycling habits. Governments and schools should take action to change these behaviours for a better future.
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important
to recycle waste product in an environment-friendly manner,
yet
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many
countries fail to do this practice. In this essay, I will explore the reasons behind this issue and suggest possible solutions.

One of the main reasons why
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people
do not recycle is the lack of education on this topic.
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Schools
do not teach
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enough
about the importance of
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recycling
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used
materials.
Also
, parents do not teach their children
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good
habits like separating plastics, glass and paper
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before
they
are thrown
away. Children continue this
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behaviour
in adulthood. One solution to this could be to include a chapter related to this topic in the
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school
curriculum
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so
that citizens become responsible at an early age.
For instance
, South Korea has mandatory environmental awareness classes in the primary
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schools
which had a huge impact on recycling.

Another cause of this issue is that
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many
cities have limited facilities for
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recycling
. By this I mean, the bins with
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different
compartments for reusable materials. In
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many
cities around the world, these are
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hard
to find and
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often
poorly
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utilised
. To address these problems
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governments
could invest in providing easy-to-understand
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recycling
stations which has
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clear
guidance for
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people
to follow. This would encourage citizens to recycle more. The
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recycling
rate of my city
significantly
increased after the municipality put these kinds of bins on the streets.

In conclusion
, there are
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many
reasons for peoples'
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bad
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recycling
habits.
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Governments
and
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schools
should take action to
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change
these
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behaviours
for a better future.
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IELTS essay It is quite important to recycle waste product in an environment-friendly manner, yet many countries fail to do this practice.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
250 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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