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In many countries people are spending more than are at their workplace why is that as that a negative or positive

In many countries people are spending more than are at their workplace why is that as that a negative or positive GLoOg

In some Nations masses are preferred more than time by companies this essay will articulate both of notions in forthcoming paragraphs among with my perspective commence with, the reasons of spending more hours at their workplace the predominant one earns handsome of salary. To elaborate it, some companies provide products to their employee to sell them. Meanwhile, the owner of a company identifies all of previous as well as the latest record of their employers how much time they spent at the office. If individuals do part time jobs and also the full time they will definitely get more profit from various workplaces. To epitome, , A survey conducted that is 72% of people have been working morning to the night shift in the office due to financial stability, therefore, Whom do full time work those people can win the multiple tasks or competitions in convenient ways. Despite having pros notions of consuming overtime at the workplace is there are also few cons impact of them. The fundamental reason is it makes the long distances from their family members and peers. To explicate it some multitudes have been doing jobs far away from their countries, houses and so forth. In this way, they cannot meet with them on a regular basis. They become more addicted to their job and less social able. Since pressure throughout the workplace people more realize homeless and loneliness among with suffering from many health hurdles. Hence, if an individual do as like that they could not have to take care of themselves and their family members as well. In conclusion, Although there are some more constructive of expanding time at the workplace such as to invest more income through companies. I believe that spending less time is better than working long hours due to take yourself and maintain the relationship with the and others

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