It is a fact that a lot of young people leave their parents' house when they complete their graduation from high schools. They prefer to live independently as they continue their higher education or decide to work. This trend has its' own positive and negative side, but I personally believe that it has more benefits than the drawback.
On the one hand, many people believe that leaving parents house during the young age has a disadvantage. It is undeniable that many young teenagers are not yet ready to live independently by themselves. Many of these people are not yet matured in making decisions and in differentiating between right or wrong for them. As a consequence, many of the young people become addicted to narcotics and alcohol or became pregnant at a very young age.
On the other hand, despite the disadvantage, living independently at the young age has some advantages for them. Firstly, they will learn how to manage their own life and appreciate the time. They learn how to set some priorities in their life, as they have to make schedules for studying, groceries shopping, doing the laundry or cleaning their apartment by themselves. Secondly, for those who leave their parents for work, they would reduce the burden of their parents. Parents could stop the financial supports for their child and could be allocated for the younger children or for their retirement plan.
In conclusion, it is true that many young age people choose to live independently these days after they have graduated from high school. Although the trend has a drawback, but I personally believe that it has more advantages for both the child and the parents as well.
It is a fact that
a lot of
young
people
leave
their parents'
house
when they complete their graduation from high schools. They prefer to
live
independently
as they continue their higher education or decide to work. This trend has
its'
own
positive
and
negative
side,
but
I
personally
believe that it has more benefits than the drawback.
On the one hand,
many
people
believe that leaving
parents
house
during the
young
age has a disadvantage. It is undeniable that
many
young
teenagers
are not
yet
ready to
live
independently
by themselves.
Many
of these
people
are not
yet
matured in making decisions and in differentiating between right or
wrong
for them. As a consequence,
many
of the
young
people
become addicted to narcotics and alcohol or became pregnant at a
very
young
age.
On the other hand
, despite the disadvantage, living
independently
at the
young
age has
some
advantages for them.
Firstly
, they will learn how to manage their
own
life and appreciate the time. They learn how to set
some
priorities in their life, as they
have to
make
schedules for studying, groceries shopping, doing the laundry or cleaning their apartment by themselves.
Secondly
, for those who
leave
their
parents
for work, they would
reduce
the burden of their
parents
.
Parents
could
stop
the financial supports for their child and could
be allocated
for the younger children or for their retirement plan.
In conclusion
, it is true that
many
young
age
people
choose to
live
independently
these days after they have graduated from high school. Although the trend has a drawback,
but
I
personally
believe that it has more advantages for both the child and the
parents
as well
.
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