It is said that tourism has become a reliable source of money in some countries. It is further argued that it also has detrimental effects. I think the benefits outweigh the disadvantages.
I agree that in many countries, international tourism has become an important source of income. For example; I visited Turkey in 2018. A company named Popular Travels, which is based in Turkey, arranged the trip for us. It cost more than 2000 Euros. We had enjoyed a lot, as Turkey is a beautiful place to visit as well, but everything was at the cost of money. Therefore, it shows that international tourism can strengthen the economy of a country.
The only negative effect I can think of is that, if many people want to visit a certain beautiful place, then due to the heavy traffic in the region, the infra structure may not be able to cope up the increased rush thus leading to overcrowding, poor sanitation which may further lead to diseases both to the tourists as well as local people. For example; many tourists in Swat, Pakistan will enjoy the natural beauty, but if it gets overcrowded then it will be tough for people to find the required facilities. We had visited Swat few months ago, it was overcrowded. We could not even find a spot for parking, hence, we had to walk for 5 kilometers to a restaurant.
In conclusion, the benefits of tourism outweigh the disadvantages for sure, but the negative effects are there as well which need to be taken care of with time.
It
is said
that
tourism
has become a reliable source of money in
some
countries. It is
further
argued that it
also
has detrimental effects. I
think
the benefits outweigh the disadvantages.
I
agree
that in
many
countries, international
tourism
has become an
important
source of income.
For example
; I visited Turkey in 2018. A
company
named Popular Travels, which
is based
in Turkey, arranged the trip for us. It cost more than 2000 Euros. We had enjoyed a lot, as Turkey is a
beautiful
place to visit
as well
,
but
everything was at the cost of money.
Therefore
, it
shows
that international
tourism
can strengthen the economy of a country.
The
only
negative
effect I can
think
of is that, if
many
people
want to visit a certain
beautiful
place, then due to the heavy traffic in the region, the infra structure may not be able to cope up the increased rush
thus
leading to overcrowding, poor sanitation which may
further
lead to diseases both to the tourists
as well as
local
people
.
For example
;
many
tourists in Swat, Pakistan will enjoy the natural beauty,
but
if it
gets
overcrowded then it will be tough for
people
to find the required facilities. We had visited Swat few months ago, it
was overcrowded
. We could not even find a spot for parking,
hence
, we had to walk for 5 kilometers to a restaurant.
In conclusion
, the benefits of
tourism
outweigh the disadvantages for sure,
but
the
negative
effects are there
as well
which need to
be taken
care of with time.
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