Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.
Check Your Text it's free

In many countries good schools and medical facilities only available in cities. Some people believe that new teachers and doctors should work in rural area for few years, but some think everyone should be free to choose where they work. Discuss both of these views and give your own opinion.

In many countries good schools and medical facilities only available in cities. Some people believe that new teachers and doctors should work in rural area for few years, but some think everyone should be free to choose where they work. XjWO
It is true that good schools and big medical facilities located in cities. While I accept that the cloning of humans that everyone ought to choose his work place, I believe that the benefits of working doctors and tutors in rural places during few years outweigh the drawbacks. The negative implications of choosing where they want to work are often discussed. The positive implications of working in rural areas a lot for instance, poor part of state can get free education and get free medicine. If one chooses own own work place where he wants to work is not right decision being, illiterate and ill people can not develope and achieve their goals so that government should moved their to poor places. A more optimistic prediction and one that I favour, is that humans will find ways and their fortune because, the to help humans is the best decision in the world. Good schools and medical centers should be be in rural places in order to improve skills, education and health of poor humans. Teacher or good doctor who is respects own self doesn't go to work in cities while in villages or in rural places deficiency of specialists. In conclusion, I am convinced that teachers and doctors should work and choose places by government so as to develope and take care about population in rural places.
It is true that
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
schools and
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
big
medical facilities located in cities. While I accept that the cloning of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
humans
that everyone ought to choose his
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
work
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
place
, I believe that the benefits of working doctors and tutors in
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
rural
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
places
during few years outweigh the drawbacks.

The
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
negative
implications of choosing where they want to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
work
are
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
often
discussed. The
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
positive
implications of working in
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
rural
areas a lot
for instance
, poor part of state can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
free education and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
free medicine. If one chooses
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
own
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
own
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
work
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
place
where he wants to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
work
is not right decision being, illiterate and ill
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
can not
Possible spelling mistake found.
develope
and achieve their goals
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
that
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
government
should
The verb 'should' requires the base form of the verb: "move"
moved
their to poor places.

A more optimistic prediction and one that I
Possible spelling mistake. 'favour' is British English.
favour
, is that
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
humans
will find ways and their fortune
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
, the to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
humans
is the best decision in the world.
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Good
schools and medical centers should be
Consider using the past participle "been"?
be
in
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
rural
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
places
in order to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
improve
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
skills
, education and health of poor
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
humans
. Teacher or
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
doctor who is respects
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
own
self doesn't go to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
work
in cities while in villages or in
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
rural
Apostrophe might be missing. Did you mean "places'" or "place's"?
places
deficiency of specialists.

In conclusion
, I
am convinced
that teachers and doctors should
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
work
and choose
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
places
by
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
government
'So as to' expresses purpose and is used in formal texts. Consider using "to"
so as to
Possible spelling mistake found.
develope
and take care about population in
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
rural
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
places
.
What do you think?
  • This is funny writingFunny
  • I love this writingLove
  • This writing has blown my mindWow
  • It made me angryAngry
  • It made me sadSad

IELTS essay In many countries good schools and medical facilities only available in cities. Some people believe that new teachers and doctors should work in rural area for few years, but some think everyone should be free to choose where they work.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
227 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
Labels Descriptions
  • ?
    Currently is not available
  • Meet the criteria
  • Doesn't meet the criteria
Recent posts