Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.
Check Your Text it's free

Planting trees is very important for environment some people says trees should be planted in the vacant place of cities while other say housing facilities should be build instead. Do u agree or disagree

Planting trees is very important for environment some people says trees should be planted in the vacant place of cities while other say housing facilities should be build instead. Do u agree or disagree plr2
Growing more trees and plants are essential to keep environment free from pollution. It has been considered by a number of people that on unoccupied places should be covered by trees while other think that building a house is paramount rather than trees. I personally agree and feel that trees are more advantageous for holistic growth of people. There are plethora reasons which prove that trees are beneficial instead of housing. One of them is that it improves air quality. In other words, many places like hospitals, markets and roads are overcrowded and roads are congested. Vehicles emits co2 which puts adverse effect on people s health. If there are huge amount of trees are planted in vacant places they release oz and absorb co2 which will be rewarding for people and clean air quality. Another reason is global warming is another hurdle which is caused due to rise in earth's surface. As a result, ice caps are melted and rising sea level causing floods and storms which prove dangerous for people. Only planting trees is curb this issue is decreasing earth's temperature which can be done by trees as they help in cooling the surrounding due to its shade and perspiration of water. In conclusion, planting trees to conserve the environment to make it fit living is a better idea as compared to building a house due to the fact that trees improves air quality and earth's temperature.
Growing more
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
trees
and plants are essential to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
keep
environment free from pollution. It has
been considered
by a number of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
that on unoccupied places should
be covered
by
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
trees
while other
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
think
that building a
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
house
is paramount
rather
than
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
trees
. I
personally
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
agree
and feel that
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
trees
are more advantageous for holistic growth of
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
.

There are plethora reasons which prove that
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
trees
are beneficial
instead
of housing. One of them is that it
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
improves
air quality.
In other words
,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
places like hospitals, markets and roads
are overcrowded
and roads
are congested
.
Possible agreement error. You should probably use: "vehicle emits".
Vehicles emits
co2 which puts adverse effect on
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
s health. If there are huge
Possible agreement error. Did you mean "amounts"?
amount
of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
trees
are planted
in vacant places they release oz and absorb co2 which will be rewarding for
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
and clean air quality.

Another reason is global warming is another hurdle which
is caused
due to rise in earth's surface.
As a result
, ice caps
are melted
and rising sea level causing floods and storms which prove
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
dangerous
for
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
.
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Only
planting
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
trees
is curb this issue is decreasing earth's temperature which can
be done
by
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
trees
as they
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
in cooling the surrounding due to its shade and perspiration of water.

In conclusion
, planting
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
trees
to conserve the environment to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
it fit living is a better
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
idea
as compared to building a
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
house
due to the fact that
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
trees
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
improves
air quality and earth's temperature.
What do you think?
  • This is funny writingFunny
  • I love this writingLove
  • This writing has blown my mindWow
  • It made me angryAngry
  • It made me sadSad

IELTS essay Planting trees is very important for environment some people says trees should be planted in the vacant place of cities while other say housing facilities should be build instead. Do u agree or disagree

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
239 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
Labels Descriptions
  • ?
    Currently is not available
  • Meet the criteria
  • Doesn't meet the criteria
Recent posts