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Some people think that paying tax is their only duty. While others believe that we have more responsibilities towards our society. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

Some people think that paying tax is their only duty. While others believe that we have more responsibilities towards our society. nY2l

Paying tax is an essential duty of every citizen. It is believed that paying tax is not the only duty but there are some other responsibilities too of every civilians for the society. This essay elucidates both views in trailed paragraphs along with the opinion at the end. To embark with, most of the civilians are aware of paying tax consequently it will help in the economy moreover, it will come back to the citizens in any form. However, they believe that there is no duty towards their society except paying tax regularly. Tax is surcharge of every luxury government is providing to the people owing to this reduction in corruption can be observed. Additionally, transportation, health and education system can be improved by government through collecting tax. Apart from this, there are several other duties which should be fulfilled by the ordinary people. One of them is keeping the surrounding clean which can be beneficial for everyone's health and hygiene. Consequently, certain of people throw garbage everywhere regardlessly. Another one is that more and more trees should be grown to save the environment as well as habitat of animals. With increasing urbanisation and technology, forest areas are declining day by day to construct industries and shopping malls. Additionally, by understanding such responsibility it can lead to better future for the society. To conclude, paying tax is necessary but people should be more responsible and fulfill their duty rigorously.

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 of every citizen. It is believed
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paying
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tax
 is not the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
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duty
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but
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some
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civilians
 for the society. This essay elucidates both views in trailed paragraphs along with the opinion at the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
.

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paying
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tax
consequently
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help
 in the economy moreover
, it will This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approacharrive
come
 back to the citizens in any form. However
, they believe that there is no You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfunctionchoretaskbusinessserviceoffice
duty
 towards their society except You use this word too often, consider replacing it withrefundsettlehandleextendgrantreimburse
paying
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tax
regularly
. You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdutylevyfinepriceratecost
Tax
 is surcharge of every luxury This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :national authoritypublic authority
government
 is providing to the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
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. Additionally
, transportation, health and education system can be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :ameliorated
improved
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government
 through collecting tax.

Apart from this, there are several other You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfunctionchoretaskbusinessserviceoffice
duties
 which should be fulfilled
 by the ordinary You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
. One of them is keeping the surrounding clean which can be beneficial for everyone's health and hygiene. Consequently
, certain of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
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regardlessly
. Another one is that more and more trees should be grown
 to save the environment as well
 as habitat of animals. With increasing Possible spelling mistake. 'urbanisation' is British English.urbanization
urbanisation
 and technology, forest areas are declining day by day to construct industries and shopping malls. Additionally
, by understanding such responsibility it can lead to better future for the society.

To conclude
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paying
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tax
 is necessary This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
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people
 should be more responsible and fulfill their You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfunctionchoretaskbusinessserviceoffice
duty
rigorously
. 