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Write about the following topic: Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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Due to increase of population in last few decades, demand of goods have also incline in great demand. Good produce by factory’s need to meet the people requirement and last for quite a number of days, which directlly leads for the production of non degradable material and waste. People are also not completely aware about consequences of waste matter laying around them against their health. Firstly, due to internationalisation factories are tend to produce products in large quantity to supply around the globe. Also while producing this goods, lots of wastes are generated as byproduct, which is lying on some open ground or flushed in water. People are also not taking it seriously about the after effect of waste around them, people through the waste material any where they find and open ground or flowing water. They believe if cleaning their house is enough and throwing them on roadside is good, which is really danger for society. Although, fulfilling requirements of the public, higher bodies should take strict action against company who produce lot many of waste which is not degradable and ask them to plan for making it decompose or recycle it. People who are irresponsible about the waste they should be filled with penalties, so that they throw less amount of waste on public places. In support to above line, I remember about the waste lying around my building compound, which was caused by near by public, it eventually got reduce when higher bodies impose heavy penalties on them and now I can see much less than previous.
Due to increase of population in last few decades, demand of
goods
have
also
incline
in great demand.
Good
produce by factory’s need to
meet
the
people
requirement and last for quite a number of days, which
directlly
leads for the production of
non degradable
material and
waste
.
People
are
also
not completely aware about consequences of
waste
matter laying
around
them against their health.

Firstly
, due to
internationalisation
factories are
tend
to produce products in large quantity to supply
around
the globe.
Also
while producing
this
goods
, lots of
wastes
are generated
as byproduct, which is lying on
some
open ground or flushed in water.
People
are
also
not taking it
seriously
about the after effect of
waste
around
them,
people
through the
waste
material
any where
they find and open ground or flowing water. They believe if cleaning their
house
is
enough
and throwing them on roadside is
good
, which is
really
danger
for society.

Although, fulfilling requirements of the public, higher bodies should take strict action against
company
who produce lot
many
of
waste
which is not degradable and ask them to plan for making it decompose or recycle it.
People
who are irresponsible about the
waste
they should
be filled
with penalties,
so
that they throw less amount of
waste
on public places.

In support to above line, I remember about the
waste
lying
around
my building compound, which
was caused
by
near by
public, it
eventually
got
reduce
when higher bodies impose heavy penalties on them and
now
I can
see
much less than previous.
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IELTS essay : Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced?

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  American English
4 paragraphs
260 words
5.5
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