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In many countrie stoday, parents are able to choose to send their children to single-sex schools or co-educational schools. Some perople think that children going to sinle-sex schools have disadvantage later in life. To what extent do you agree?

In many countrie stoday, parents are able to choose to send their children to single-sex schools or co-educational schools. Some perople think that children going to sinle-sex schools have disadvantage later in life. mmp1
As of today in many countries, parents have given choice for selecting the school. It can be either, single-gender or co-educational school. Whereas some individuals still thinking that children going to single-sex school will face problems in later part of life. I disagree with this opinion. Parents should consider more on quality education which results in student carrier rather they should avoid discriminating on gender-based education. Parents can choose the right school for their child and they need take to into account on various factors. As of today, most educational institutions focussed only on producing results that will help students to choose their higher education; in addition to that, it is also adding the advantage reputation of the organization. Mostly in cities many parents opt for girl’s school for their children because of excellence of the institution. For instance, Swami Vivekananda College for women is considered Asia’s biggest women institution. This institution holds the record for its excellence in the education system for many years. Most often parents preferred to select the education based on their own experience. But whether, this ideology will match the current scenario is the question. Many Co-ed institutions developed based on standard of education and facilities. Despite they offer students to attract for getting admission for their siblings and relatives due to business competition. Some Institution, they include the sibling information in admission application checklist and with this data they could approach parents the subsequent admission. In conclusion, Criteria for selecting the schools or college should be preferred based on the competency of the institution. In this scenario, A Gender-based education system may not be deemed necessary taken for consideration.
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countries,
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parents
have
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given
choice for selecting the
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school
. It can be either, single-gender or co-educational
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school
.
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Whereas
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some
individuals
still
thinking that children going to single-sex
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school
will face problems in later part of life. I disagree with this opinion.
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Parents
should consider more on quality
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education
which results in student carrier
rather
they should avoid discriminating on gender-based education.

Parents can choose the right
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school
for their
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child and
they need take to into account on various factors. As of
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
today
, most educational institutions focussed
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only
on producing results that will
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help
students to choose their higher
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education
;
in addition
to that, it is
also
adding the advantage reputation of the organization.
Mostly
in cities
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many
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parents
opt for girl’s
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school
for their children
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because
of excellence of the
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institution
.
For instance
, Swami Vivekananda College for women
is considered
Asia’s biggest women
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institution
. This
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institution
holds the record for its excellence in the
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education
system for
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
years.

Most
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often
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
parents
preferred to select the
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education
based on their
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own
experience.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
But
whether, this ideology will match the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
current
scenario is the question.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
Many
Co-ed institutions developed based on standard of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
education
and facilities. Despite they offer students to attract for getting admission for their siblings and relatives due to business competition.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
Some
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Institution
, they include the sibling information in admission application checklist and with this data they could approach
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
parents
the subsequent admission.

In conclusion
, Criteria for selecting the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
schools
or college should
be preferred
based on the competency of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
institution
. In this scenario, A Gender-based
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
education
system may not
be deemed
necessary taken for consideration.
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IELTS essay In many countrie stoday, parents are able to choose to send their children to single-sex schools or co-educational schools. Some perople think that children going to sinle-sex schools have disadvantage later in life.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
275 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
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