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Advances in science and technology and other areas of society in the last 100 years have transformed the way we live as well as postponing the day we die. There is no better lime to be alive than now. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Advances in science and technology and other areas of society in the last 100 years have transformed the way we live as well as postponing the day we die. There is no better lime to be alive than now. with this opinion? gMmD
Development in science and technology has enhanced the human lifestyle significantly over 100 years and it is always good to get updated with advanced technologies. I agree with the above context. In the 21st century, we are looking forward to developing countries by all means. So in such a scenario, it is always better to get updated with the advancement of the inventions. Firstly, technology is being introduced for the betterment of our lifestyle. Accepting the new research is a way of respecting the invention. We should be always ready for exploring it and it is good to evaluate to what extent its benefits. Without the support of the people, no invention would have succeeded in this world. Telecommunication is the best example of this, Motorola is the first wireless device came since from time, we started using mobile phones from then landline telephones got vanished slowly. This is also a kind of technology evolution, when the new one comes in picture the old one will be removed off slowly. Secondly, Getting updated with the current technology will bring global attention. Day today, we are listening to new updates of the invention somewhere around the world. People should have a proper mindset for accepting the new technologies. They should accept and adapt to new technologies, rather than avoiding them completely, it ruins the effort of the invention. When Samsung launched their first smartphones in India, for the first year the sales were marginally less, but over a while, it showed a huge profit for the organization. In conclusion, Science and technology is an on-going process; invention will exist for the betterment of the human lifestyle. Peoples should be always looking for updating themself to the current needs. This paves the way for welcoming future inventions.
Development in science and
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technology
has enhanced the human lifestyle
significantly
over 100 years and it is always
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good
to
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get
updated with advanced
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technologies
. I
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agree
with the above context. In the 21st century, we are looking forward to
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developing countries
by all means.
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So
in such a scenario, it is always better to
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get
updated with the advancement of the inventions.

Firstly
,
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technology
is
being introduced
for the betterment of our lifestyle. Accepting the
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new
research is a way of respecting the invention. We should be always ready for exploring it and it is
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
to evaluate to what extent its benefits. Without the support of the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
, no invention would have succeeded in this world. Telecommunication is the best example of this, Motorola is the
first
wireless device came since from time, we
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started
using mobile phones from then landline telephones
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got
vanished
slowly
. This is
also
a kind of
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technology
evolution, when the
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new
one
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comes
in picture the
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old
one will
be removed
off
slowly
.

Secondly
, Getting updated with the
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current
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technology
will bring global attention. Day
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today
, we are listening to
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new
updates of the invention somewhere around the world.
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People
should have a proper mindset for accepting the
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new
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technologies
. They should accept and adapt to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
new
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
technologies
,
rather
than avoiding them completely, it ruins the effort of the invention. When Samsung launched their
first
smartphones in India, for the
first
year the sales were
marginally
less,
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but
over a while, it
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showed
a huge profit for the organization.

In conclusion
, Science and
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technology
is an
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on-going
process; invention will exist for the betterment of the human lifestyle. Peoples should be always looking for updating
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themself
to the
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current
needs. This paves the way for welcoming future inventions.
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IELTS essay Advances in science and technology and other areas of society in the last 100 years have transformed the way we live as well as postponing the day we die. There is no better lime to be alive than now. with this opinion?

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