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In many cities crime can be seen why do you think it is happen what step can be taken to reduce the level of crime

In many cities crime can be seen why do you think it is happen what step can be taken to reduce the level of crime 7LPO5

In many urban areas illegal activities can be look. This essay intends to discuss the cause why unlawful activities is high in urban areas. To began with, crime is bad think for any developing area. Increase the violence is cause of government failure. For example unemployment, uneducated, poverty. To overcome the rate of crime government needs to improve the number of employment in society. Education is also helpful to reduce the violence in areas. Educated people knows what should be right or wrong for me and our areas. He avoid to do any harmful activity. Government needs to increase the cctv Survillence around a clock. Administration make a strong law against violence or give hard punishment to guilty people

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