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Some people think that the only way to have success in business is to have a unique product

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Currently the vast majority of people run a business andf everyone have private tips and tricks. Some people thinl thatv having a unusual product is the key to success. I consider that to get a breakthought in buiesness other facilites also important. First of all to have a good business require an extremely significant skills such as math, logicall thinking, time management and especcially experience. On the another hand location and advertising play a big role. The reason for that businessmans ttend to find out crowded places. For instance, supermarkets, restaurants, parks. However at the same time it provides convinient way to advertise it to public there. According to this it can be popular brand. Generally speaking creating a business is not easy than we think, however it has a couple factors that needed to be avoid. Firstly do not start business with low percentage of people. It has a negative impact on wealth. Seconly try not to copy proct or style of producing it with opponents. Manafacturing something new and unique better. Finally when it comes to employes, relatives for this job is not suitable. As we know business do not have relative links. In some cases it can destroy the family Overall In my opinion observing and studying budiness rules is extremely vital. Books or advixe from succesfull person might be useful
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the vast majority of
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people
run a
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business
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andf
everyone
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have
private tips and tricks.
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Some
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people
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thinl
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thatv
having
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a
unusual product is the key to success. I consider that to
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get
a
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breakthought
in
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buiesness
other
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facilites
also
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important
.

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First of all
to have a
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good
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business
require an
extremely
significant
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skills
such as math,
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logicall
thinking, time management and
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especcially
experience. On the another hand location and advertising play a
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big
role. The reason for that
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businessmans
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ttend
to find out crowded places.
For instance
, supermarkets, restaurants, parks.
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However
at the same time it provides
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convinient
way to advertise it to public there. According to this it can be popular brand.

Generally
speaking creating a
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business
is not
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easy
than we
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think
,
however
it has a couple factors that needed to be
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avoid
.
Firstly
do not
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start
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business
with low percentage of
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people
. It has a
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negative
impact on wealth.
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Seconly
try not to copy
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proct
or style of producing it with opponents.
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Manafacturing
something new and unique better.
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Finally
when it
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comes
to
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employes
, relatives for this job is not suitable.
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As
we know
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business
do not have relative links. In
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some
cases it can
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destroy
the
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family


Overall
In my opinion observing and studying
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budiness
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rules
is
extremely
vital. Books or
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advixe
from
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succesfull
person might be
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useful
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IELTS essay Some people think that the only way to have success in business is to have a unique product

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
223 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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