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In future, newspaper and books will not buy. They will relieve on the online without paying resources. To what extend do u agree or degree?

In future, newspaper and books will not buy. They will relieve on the online without paying resources. BLm5d
It is an undeniable fact that due to innovation of technology, individuals attract to Ward online material rather than written researches. In future, periodic or books will not be brought by masses and they will gain knowledge about everything through the Internet. I, however, coincide with this phenomenon. Both the aspects shall be discussed in the forthcoming paragraphs before reaching a reasoned conclusion. There seem to be two main reasons stemming from this situation. To begin with, newspaper would be inconvenient option, likewise, it would be difficult to carry everywhere, in this fast-paced era. Consequently, spectors would prefer to read online newspapers so that they will read any corner of the world without taking paper materials. In the recent time, ample of humans, for instance, travel regularly for work so that it is arduous to carry in entire journey. Hence, reading online news will be extremely suitable for them, and it would be the easiest resource for the community. A second point in favour of sceptics is that reading materials are extremely costly such as educational books and novels. It is worth discussing that everyone can not afford to purchase high-cost materials. Individual, for instance, who belongs to rural areas and she or study in the medical field. So it would be not possible that they can buy all materials. Gist of the paragraph is: Individuals can avoid to spend their time monetary behind costly books, if online materials are free of cost. As far as the eventualities of concerned, periodicals and books can not be neglected. To elucidate, there are not any technical glitches. We will learn without disturbance of network issues. Additionally, there are plenty of advertisements come to so it would be difficult to concentrate during reading. To conclude, owing to advance application, community opt online materials. It is not solely stupendous option, however, it is extremely cheap and everyone can afford this. Hence, it would be difficult to arduous towards newspaper and books.
It is an undeniable fact that due to innovation of technology, individuals attract to Ward
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online
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material
rather
than written researches.
Did you mean: "In the future"?
In future
, periodic or
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books
will not
be brought
by
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masses and
they will gain knowledge about everything through the Internet. I,
however
, coincide with this phenomenon. Both the aspects shall
be discussed
in the forthcoming paragraphs
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before
reaching a reasoned conclusion.

There seem to be two main reasons stemming from this situation. To
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begin
with, newspaper would be inconvenient option,
likewise
, it would be difficult to carry everywhere, in this
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fast
-paced era.
Consequently
,
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spectors
would prefer to read
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online
newspapers
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so
that they will read any corner of the world without taking paper
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materials
. In the recent time, ample of humans,
for instance
, travel
regularly
for work
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so
that it is arduous to carry in entire journey.
Hence
, reading
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online
news will be
extremely
suitable for them, and it would be the easiest resource for the community.

A second point in
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favour
of
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sceptics
is that reading
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materials
are
extremely
costly such as educational
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books
and novels. It is worth discussing that everyone can not afford to
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purchase
high-cost
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materials
. Individual,
for instance
, who belongs to rural
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areas and
she or study in the medical field.
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So
it would be not possible that they can
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buy
all
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materials
. Gist of the paragraph is: Individuals can
The verb 'avoid' is used with the gerund form: "avoid spending".
avoid to spend
their time monetary behind costly
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books
, if
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online
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materials
are free of cost.

As far as the eventualities of concerned, periodicals and
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books
can not
be neglected
. To elucidate, there are not any technical glitches. We will learn without disturbance of network issues.
Additionally
, there are
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plenty
of advertisements
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come
to
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so
it would be difficult to concentrate during reading.

To conclude
, owing to advance application, community opt
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online
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materials
. It is not
solely
stupendous option,
however
, it is
extremely
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
cheap
and everyone can afford this.
Hence
, it would be difficult to arduous towards newspaper and
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books
.
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IELTS essay In future, newspaper and books will not buy. They will relieve on the online without paying resources.

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