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In future cars and busses are driver less

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Irrefutably, in this contemporary era, the autopilot cars and buses are going to take over normal car in which only passengers can travel. There are many pros than cons for above-mentional statement. Thus, the both aspects with proper justification for aforementional situation are discussed in upcoming paragraphs. To commence with, there are plethora of reason why driverless vehicles has more benefits than regular vehicles, the first and foremost advantage is that driverless cars or trucks operate by artificial intelligence so that the whole map are inbuilt in car. As a result, it save lot of time because AI find less traffic road ls for traveling and accurate route. For example, the automobile company called tesla they made driverless car name model S. the car trail was successfully completed and they got permission form government to launch car for sell. Furthermore, the second main benefit is from driverless vehicle is that the accident rate are going to decrease because due to AI the car will be pack up with banch of features such as automatic breaking system, 3D satellite view of car and many more. In addition, no one car or truck can brake traffic lights because the program of traffic rule is already build in car operating system. Moreover, in normal truck some driver are drive truck thousand of mile for transport goods one place to another from that driver suffer from some health issue if driver less truck there so no one can suffer form heath problem. That is why driver less vehicles is more beneficial the regular one. On the other hand, there are two major drawbacks of autopilot vehicles is that it increase unemployment and it will be very expensive. Consequently, the gap of poor and rich people are going to be increase. In conclusion, this essay is tend to reiterate the everything has own significance, nothing cannot be ignored. Although, i think that it change the future and aids to people for time saving and reduce accidentsIrrefutably, in this contemporary era, the autopilot cars and buses are going to take over normal car in which only passengers can travel. There are many pros than cons for above-mentional statement. Thus, the both aspects with proper justification for aforementional situation are discussed in upcoming paragraphs. To commence with, there are plethora of reason why driverless vehicles has more benefits than regular vehicles, the first and foremost advantage is that driverless cars or trucks operate by artificial intelligence so that the whole map are inbuilt in car. As a result, it save lot of time because AI find less traffic road ls for traveling and accurate route. For example, the automobile company called tesla they made driverless car name model S. the car trail was successfully completed and they got permission form government to launch car for sell. Furthermore, the second main benefit is from driverless vehicle is that the accident rate are going to decrease because due to AI the car will be pack up with banch of features such as automatic breaking system, 3D satellite view of car and many more. In addition, no one car or truck can brake traffic lights because the program of traffic rule is already build in car operating system. Moreover, in normal truck some driver are drive truck thousand of mile for transport goods one place to another from that driver suffer from some health issue if driver less truck there so no one can suffer form heath problem. That is why driver less vehicles is more beneficial the regular one. On the other hand, there are two major drawbacks of autopilot vehicles is that it increase unemployment and it will be very expensive. Consequently, the gap of poor and rich people are going to be increase. In conclusion, this essay is tend to reiterate the everything has own significance, nothing cannot be ignored. Although, i think that it change the future and aids to people for time saving and reduce accidents
Irrefutably
, in this contemporary era, the autopilot
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cars
and buses are going to take over
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normal
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car
in which
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only
passengers can travel. There are
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pros than cons for
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above-mentional
statement.
Thus
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aforementional
situation
are discussed
in upcoming paragraphs.

To commence with, there are plethora of reason why driverless
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vehicles
has more
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benefits
than
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regular
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vehicles
, the
first
and foremost advantage is that driverless
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cars
or
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trucks
operate by artificial intelligence
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so
that the whole map are inbuilt in
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car
.
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save
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lot of
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time
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AI find
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less
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traffic
road ls for traveling and accurate route.
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, the automobile
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company
called tesla they made driverless
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car
name model S. the
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trail was
successfully
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completed and
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to launch
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car
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for sell
.

Furthermore
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benefit
is from driverless
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vehicle
is that the accident rate are going to decrease
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because
due to AI the
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car
will be pack up with
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banch
of features such as automatic breaking
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and
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many
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lights
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there
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no one can
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why
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driver
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less
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vehicles
is more beneficial the
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regular
one.

On the other hand
, there are two major drawbacks of autopilot
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vehicles
is that it increase unemployment and it will be
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very
expensive.
Consequently
, the gap of poor and rich
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people
are going to be increase.

In conclusion
, this essay is tend to reiterate
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the everything
has
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significance, nothing cannot be
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the future and aids to
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for
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time
saving and
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reduce
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accidentsIrrefutably
, in this contemporary era, the autopilot
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cars
and buses are going to take over
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normal
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
car
in which
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
passengers can travel. There are
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
pros than cons for
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above-mentional
statement.
Thus
, the both aspects with proper justification for
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aforementional
situation
are discussed
in upcoming paragraphs.

To commence with, there are plethora of reason why driverless
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
vehicles
has more
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
benefits
than
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
regular
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vehicles
, the
first
and foremost advantage is that driverless
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cars
or
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trucks
operate by artificial intelligence
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
that the whole map are inbuilt in
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car
.
As a result
, it
Did you mean "saves"?
save
It seems that an article is missing.
lot of
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time
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
AI find
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less
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
traffic
road ls for traveling and accurate route.
For example
, the automobile
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company
called tesla they made driverless
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
car
name model S. the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
car
trail was
successfully
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
completed and
they
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got
permission
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form
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government
to launch
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car
Did you mean "for sale"?
for sell
.

Furthermore
, the second main
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benefit
is from driverless
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vehicle
is that the accident rate are going to decrease
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because
due to AI the
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car
will be pack up with
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banch
of features such as automatic breaking
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system
, 3D satellite view of
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car
and
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many
more.
In addition
, no one
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car
or
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truck
can
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brake
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traffic
lights
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because
the program of
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traffic
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rule
is already build in
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car
operating
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system
.
Moreover
, in
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normal
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truck
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some
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driver
are drive
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truck
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thousand
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goods
one place to another from that
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driver
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from
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some
health issue if
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driver
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truck
there
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so
no one can
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suffer
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heath problem.
That is
why
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driver
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less
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vehicles
is more beneficial the
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regular
one.

On the other hand
, there are two major drawbacks of autopilot
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vehicles
is that it increase unemployment and it will be
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very
expensive.
Consequently
, the gap of poor and rich
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people
are going to be increase.

In conclusion
, this essay is tend to reiterate
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the everything
has
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own
significance, nothing cannot be
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ignored
. Although,
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i
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think
that it
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change
the future and aids to
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people
for
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time
saving and
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reduce
accidents
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IELTS essay In future cars and busses are driver less

Essay
  American English
9 paragraphs
660 words
6.0
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