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In contemporary era, technology is increased faster in a whole universe.

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In contemporary era, technology is increased faster in a whole universe. Nowadays parents are recognised to use technical gadgets like Mobile phone or computer to their children for improve technology ability. To commence with, Children are use various type of technical gadgets in typical days but mobile phone is used more than other technical tool, but it is not used regarding their jobs and others office work
In contemporary era, technology
is increased
faster in a whole universe. Nowadays parents are
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recognised
to
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use
technical gadgets like Mobile phone or computer to their children for
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improve
technology ability. To commence with, Children are
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use
various type of technical gadgets in typical days
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but
mobile phone is
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used
more than other technical tool,
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but
it is not
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used
regarding their jobs
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and others
office
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work
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IELTS essay In contemporary era, technology is increased faster in a whole universe.

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
66 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.5
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    Present relevant ideas
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