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The given picture illustrate require steps for recycle wasted glass bottles. Generally, recycling of wasted glass bottles involves 3 main stages and this stages approximately need 11 steps to supply a new bottles for local distributions. In the first stage, all wasted glass bottles will transported from collection point. Before bringing the glasses into glass factory, they must be washed by high-pressure water and seprated base on their types. The following steps involving bricking bottles into pieces, burning in furnace and shaping melt recycle glass, new material can be add if that required, for create a new bottles. Finally, new bottles fill with propused objectand will sent to markets.
The
given
picture illustrate require steps for recycle wasted
glass
bottles.

Generally
, recycling of wasted
glass
bottles
involves 3 main stages and this stages approximately need 11 steps to supply a
new
bottles
for local distributions.

In the
first
stage, all wasted
glass
bottles
will transported from collection point.
Before
bringing the glasses into
glass
factory, they
must
be washed
by high-pressure water and
seprated
base on their types.

The following steps involving bricking
bottles
into pieces, burning in furnace and shaping melt recycle
glass
,
new
material can be
add
if that required, for create a
new
bottles
.
Finally
,
new
bottles
fill with
propused
objectand
will
sent
to markets.
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IELTS essay recycle wasted glass bottles

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