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In certain countries , citizens prefer to own a house rather than rent one . They also believe that being the owner of a home is vitally important in life

In certain countries, citizens prefer to own a house rather than rent one. They also believe that being the owner of a home is vitally important in life JYbjB
In certain countries, citizens prefer to own a house rather than rent one. They also believe that being the owner of a home is vitally important in life. They would feel safer and would be able to resell a home if they bought one. While renting, they would be required to pay rent on a monthly basis and could be evicted if they could not afford to do so. This viewpoint, in my opinion, it has both advantages and disadvantages. This essay will present two perspectives on the subject Fully owning the house would bring numerous benefits for the owner. First, Possessing a place to live would mean the person does not have the responsibility to pay rent monthly or anually. Second, the owner will have full access to the house. For instance, when renting a place an array of owners would not let us change the structure or replace the furniture of the house. On the contrary, bought a house which means owner could repair or change the external or internal of it like they want. Final, Owing to the fact that the house is the property of the owner which means selling or trading it away are the owner’s authority. Despite the aforementioned benefits, Purchasing a home is not affordable for certain persons. Buying a house requires that person should have financial stability, Owing to obtain a house the actual price could possibly higher than the predicted cost. Furthermore, Some people have to loan money from banks and they would mortage the house right after they purchased it. Meaning on paper the house is still their house but each month they would have to pay the lending rate money and that money typically high due to the value of the property. A clear example is a huge number of people each year could not pay the loans as the result the house they purachased would eventually belong to the bank. In conclusion, completely owning a house has numerous benefits still it has some certain drawbacks. I believe that both negativities and positivities of owning a house do not outweigh eachother.
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of a home is
vitally
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in life. They would feel safer and would be able to resell a home if they
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bought
one. While renting, they would
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to
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pay
rent on a monthly basis and could
be evicted
if they could not afford to do
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so
. This viewpoint, in my opinion, it has both advantages and disadvantages. This essay will present two perspectives on the
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subject


Fully
owning the
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house
would bring numerous benefits for the
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owner
.
First
, Possessing a place to
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live
would mean the person does not have the responsibility to
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pay
rent monthly or
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anually
. Second, the
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owner
will have full access to the
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house
.
For instance
, when renting a place an array of
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owners
would not
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us
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change
the structure or replace the furniture of the
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house
.
On the contrary
,
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bought
a
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house
which means
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owner
could repair or
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change
the external or internal of it like they want. Final, Owing to the fact that the
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house
is the property of the
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owner
which means selling or trading it away
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are
the
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owner’s
authority.

Despite the aforementioned benefits, Purchasing a home is not affordable for certain persons. Buying a
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house
requires that person should have financial stability, Owing to obtain a
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house
the actual price could
possibly
higher than the predicted cost.
Furthermore
,
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Some
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people
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loan money from
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banks and
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mortage
the
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right after they
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purchased
it. Meaning on paper the
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is
still
their
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house
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but
each month they would
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the lending rate money and that money
typically
high due to the value of the property. A
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clear
example is a huge number of
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people
each year could not
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pay
the loans as the result the
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they
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purachased
would
eventually
belong to the bank.

In conclusion
, completely owning a
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has numerous benefits
still
it has
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some
certain drawbacks. I believe that both negativities and positivities of owning a
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do not outweigh
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eachother
.
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IELTS essay In certain countries, citizens prefer to own a house rather than rent one. They also believe that being the owner of a home is vitally important in life

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4 paragraphs
352 words
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