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In a nutshell, when I was a little baby

In a nutshell, when I was a little baby rK5o6
In a nutshell, when I was a little baby, I have been so happy because I have a great family that helped me to grow well and now become very famous doctor and all people love me. I am so proud of myself also I love all people and I'll help anyone need help. One days I went to my office that was located in Chicago and found a poor womer that lived in street for long time and now she was decided to looking for a job to help her self, I took a decision to help her and she become an employee in my office.
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doctor and all
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people
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me. I am
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so
proud of myself
also
I
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all
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people
and I'll
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help
anyone need
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help
.
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One days
I went to my office that
was located
in Chicago and found a poor
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womer
that
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lived
in street for long time and
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now
she
was decided
to looking for a job to
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help
her self, I took a decision to
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help
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her and
she become an employee in my office.
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IELTS essay In a nutshell, when I was a little baby

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
107 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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