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In a number of countries, some people think it is necessary to spend large sums of money on constructing new railway lines for very fast trains between cities. Others believe the money should be spent on improving existing public transport. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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For many people around the world, the preferred method of transportation is high-speed rail. Commuters travelling to and from work rely on the safety and efficiency, whill Tourists appreciate the convenience and novelty that trains provide. Others believe that highways, busses and regular trains should be improved before new high-speed lines are added. Safety is cheif among concerns for those who travel to work or school on a reguor basis. If one drives a car, they have to concentrate on the road not only to avoid accidents but also to prevent other drivers from causing a problem on the road. High- speed rail allows the comunter to leave the driving to the professional controlling the train, allowing them to get some work done while getting to work safely. In addition, people tend to move further and further away from city centres, where land and houses are more affordable. High-speed rail allows these commuters to travel greater distances in a shorter ammount of time. There is a flow-on effect here, because if we can reduce the number of cars on the road, we can also cut down on Traffic jams and road delays. On the other hand, high-speed trains are expensive, and some believe this money could be spend on repairing motorways which are used by cars, busses and motorcycles. Another possibility would be to use this money to build more regular commuter trains and busses to service the ever-expanding urban populations. Moreover, boaks and ferries could benefit from a budget which focuses more on existing forms of transport. In the end, public transport is an issue which affects us all. The taxes which we pay should be spent on the type of transport which will have most benefit to all citizens. In addition, we need to take into account how much the environment is damaged by fossil fuels and pollution. therefore, I believe in order to move forward, we need to embrace the idea of high -speed rail so that future generations can continue to live safely and effectively.
For
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people
around the world, the preferred method of transportation is
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high-speed
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rail
. Commuters travelling to and from
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work
rely on the safety and efficiency,
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whill
Tourists appreciate the convenience and novelty that
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trains
provide. Others believe that highways, busses and regular
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trains
should be
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improved
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before
new
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high-speed
lines are
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added
.

Safety is
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cheif
among concerns for those who travel to
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work
or school on a
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reguor
basis. If one drives a car, they
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have to
concentrate on the
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road
not
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only
to avoid accidents
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but
also
to
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prevent
other drivers from causing
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problem
on the
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road
. High- speed
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rail
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allows
the
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comunter
to
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leave
the driving to the professional controlling the
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train
, allowing them to
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get
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some
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work
done while getting to
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work
safely
.

In addition
,
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people
tend to
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move
further
and
further
away from city
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centres
, where land and
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houses
are more affordable.
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High-speed
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rail
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allows
these commuters to travel greater distances in a shorter
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ammount
of time. There is a flow-on effect here,
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because
if we can
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reduce
the number of cars on the
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road
, we can
also
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cut
down on Traffic jams and
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road
delays.

On the other hand
,
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high-speed
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trains
are expensive, and
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some
believe this money could be
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spend
on repairing motorways which are
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used
by cars, busses and motorcycles.
Another possibility
would be to
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use
this money to build more regular commuter
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trains
and busses to service the ever-expanding urban populations.
Moreover
,
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boaks
and ferries could benefit from a budget which focuses more on existing forms of transport.

In the
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end
, public transport is an issue which affects us all. The taxes which we pay should
be spent
on the type of transport which will have most benefit to all citizens.
In addition
, we need to take into account how much the environment
is damaged
by fossil fuels and pollution.
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therefore
, I believe in order to
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move
forward, we need to embrace the
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idea
of high -speed
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rail
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so
that future generations can continue to
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live
safely
and
effectively
.
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IELTS essay In a number of countries, some people think it is necessary to spend large sums of money on constructing new railway lines for very fast trains between cities. Others believe the money should be spent on improving existing public transport.

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