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In a number of countries some people think it is necessary to spend large sums of money on constructing new railway lines for very fast trains between cities .others believe the money should be spent on improving existing public transport. discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

In a number of countries some people think it is necessary to spend large sums of money on constructing new railway lines for very fast trains between cities. others believe the money should be spent on improving existing public transport. BKDa
Transportation is more important and convenient for public in daily life. People think it is paramount to invedt money on constructing modern trains which helps to travel between cities. While, othet believe that money should be used on renovate public transport. In this essay i will discuss both views and justify my views in the following paragraphs. In this era, countries should speand more funds for new railway tracks because advance technology save time of public. New fast trains runs than public can easily commuting for works. It save individuals precious time. Moreover, there are alternative option of trains and railway lines multiple trains runs on the tracks so people can easily transport. For example, while travel for office or works people gey multiple option of trains and more convenient. On the other hand, many people believe that money should invest in renew the transport system. Instead of new, if public renovate the other facilities than it helps in saving faunds. And cash can use for other develop things because in improving old things minor changes are done so it do not cost more. Secondly if renewed its helps in public comfort because new technology public gets many facilities in transport system. Public journey become peaceful. Developing a new technology which gives passengers comfort. People are familier with bus and train due to daily commute if they get more facilities such as comfort seat, free wifi and ticket scanner because of such availability they bevome more comfort. For instance, recently in india at railway station and bus station free wifi available. To conclude, the advantages of both view are equal whereas i believe that new rail line for fast trains have prominent because it is time saving and more convenient foe every individual.
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money on constructing modern
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. In this essay
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will discuss both views and justify my views in the following paragraphs.

In this era, countries should
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more funds for
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new
railway
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tracks
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because
advance technology save time of
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public
.
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fast
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trains
runs than
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can
easily
commuting for works. It
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save
individuals precious time.
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, there are alternative option of
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and railway lines multiple
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tracks
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multiple option of
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trains
and more convenient.

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,
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people
believe that money should invest in renew the
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renovate the other facilities than it
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helps
in saving
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. And cash can
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for other develop things
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in improving
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things minor
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not cost more.
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comfort
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because
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new
technology
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gets
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facilities in
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journey become peaceful. Developing a
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new
technology which gives passengers
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comfort
.
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are
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familier
with bus and
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train
due to daily commute if they
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more facilities such as
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comfort
seat, free
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wifi
and ticket scanner
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bevome
more
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comfort
.
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india
at railway station and bus station free
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wifi
available.

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, the advantages of both view are equal whereas
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believe that
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rail line for
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fast
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trains
have prominent
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because
it is time saving and more convenient foe every individual.
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IELTS essay In a number of countries some people think it is necessary to spend large sums of money on constructing new railway lines for very fast trains between cities. others believe the money should be spent on improving existing public transport.

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