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In a number of countries, some people think it is

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Country transportation has very indispensable for the civilians and most of country people prefer railway as a transportation, so one group think government should establish new tracks to become faster train. However, Other group of individual believe resources should be spent on existing vehicles. I will be articulated both prospective and I agree with the former view. First and foremost, Spending on railway it is beneficial for country public transportation because mostly people catch train for their work and other outside things, hence, When the number of lanes increasing that time convenient for train passenger. Additionally, people are reached their destination in less time by train. Also, the trains number went up, therefore railway station and inside train not becoming very congested. People are visiting their destination without feel tired. To example, Japan people are using train for their work, which has the highest number across the world for use train. On the other hand, Government transport, which is exciting today vital for us, government should be spent money on public transport such as bus. Because, many areas not have facility of railway station, thus, people not use trains. But in this type of area also people use city buses instead of trains. And that is reason improving facility of buses beneficial for passenger. To conclude, New railway lanes and present time transport vehicle both are important and beneficial but in future railway becoming more convenient and faster. People also like it, so government should make new tracks for trains.
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very
indispensable for the civilians and most of country
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people
prefer
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railway
as a transportation,
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so
one group
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think
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government
should establish new
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tracks
to become faster
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train
.
However
, Other group of individual believe resources should
be spent
on existing vehicles. I will
be articulated
both prospective and I
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agree
with the former view.

First
and foremost, Spending on
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railway
it is beneficial for country public transportation
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because
mostly
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people
catch
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train
for their work and other outside things,
hence
, When the number of lanes increasing that time convenient for
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train
passenger.
Additionally
,
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people
are reached
their destination in less time by
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train
.
Also
, the
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trains
number went up,
therefore
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railway
station and inside
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train
not becoming
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very
congested.
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People
are visiting their destination without feel tired. To example, Japan
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people
are using
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train
for their work, which has the highest number across the world for
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use
train.

On the other hand
,
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transport, which is exciting
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today
vital for us,
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government
should
be spent
money on public transport such as bus.
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,
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many
areas not have facility of
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railway
station,
thus
,
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people
not
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use
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trains
.
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in this type of area
also
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people
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use
city buses
instead
of
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trains
. And
that is
reason improving facility of buses beneficial for passenger.

To conclude
, New
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railway
lanes and present time transport vehicle both are
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important
and beneficial
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but
in future
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railway
becoming more convenient and faster.
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People
also
like it,
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so
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government
should
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make
new
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tracks
for
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trains
.
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IELTS essay In a number of countries, some people think it is

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
250 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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