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Authorities should utilize capital on railways than High ways .I differ with the statement to a large extent. Reasons for my position are justified in ensuring paragraphs.

Authorities should utilize capital on railways than High ways. I differ with the statement to a large extent. Reasons for my position are justified in ensuring paragraphs. 3aDxX
Discussing the reasons for my view. the prime one is that roads give a flexibility to travel anywhere in local and in cities. By road's people can travel inside and outside of their location, whereas train travel is suitable on limited scale. Moreover roads connect every region. As a result it's very convenient for every types of transportation to rely on so it also would be beneficial for Trade and business sector. Furthermore, it gives availability of various transport, it would be a fruitful for region's economic condition and tourism. By paying toll tax nd also it's helps to advertise tourism of respected state by putting banners on vehicles. In addition road conditions to prevent road accident. better roads can minimise road accidents outrightlyOn the country, I can not overlook the brighter side of trains, as it doesn't occur any traffic problem to travellers So, trains are affordable for everyone. trains offer cheap fair compared to other transport so anyone can travel by train. To conclude, it can be stated that authority should invert more money on roads as it provides more flexibility of travel improve economic condition and also prevents from danger accidents; however goverment should also spend some part of budget on trains because it is affordable for every individuals and have no traffic problem
Discussing the reasons for my view.
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prime one is that
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roads
give a flexibility to
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travel
anywhere in local and in cities. By road's
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people
can
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travel
inside and
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outside of
their location, whereas
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train
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travel
is suitable on limited scale.
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Moreover
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roads
connect every region.
As a result
it's
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very
convenient for every
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types
of transportation to rely on
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so
it
also
would be beneficial for Trade and business sector.
Furthermore
, it gives availability of various transport, it would be a fruitful for region's economic condition and tourism. By paying toll tax
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nd
also
it's
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helps
to advertise tourism of respected state by putting banners on vehicles. In
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addition
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road
conditions to
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prevent
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road
accident.
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better
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roads
can
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minimise
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road
accidents
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outrightlyOn
the country, I can not overlook the brighter side of
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trains
, as it doesn't occur any traffic problem to
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travellers
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So
,
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trains
are affordable for everyone.
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trains
offer
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cheap
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fair
compared to other transport
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so
anyone can
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travel
by
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train
.
To conclude
, it can
be stated
that authority should invert more money on
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roads
as it provides more flexibility of
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travel
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improve
economic condition and
also
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prevents
from
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danger
accidents;
however
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goverment
should
also
spend
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some
part of budget on
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trains
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because
it is affordable for every
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individuals
and have no traffic
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problem
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IELTS essay Authorities should utilize capital on railways than High ways. I differ with the statement to a large extent. Reasons for my position are justified in ensuring paragraphs.

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