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In 10 years the world will change dramatically. Do you agree or disagree?

In 10 years the world will change dramatically. 9Lwa3
Nowadays, the world is changing at an alarming rate. Various inventions are being created day by day. So, what will happen in 2030 years? Try to imagine the world in 10 years period. My world in 2030. It is a complicated issue to consider. Tremendous changes we will face up to and how these changes will affect us. Now I try to write my imaginations and I will support my opinion with examples. Firstly, we need to think about what aspects our talk should include. In my mind, there are several issues, which are more hot topics as environmental, educational, well-being of society, health care, work market as well. A good deal of above mentioned should take into account in a wake of pandemic situation covered the world where we live caused by COVID 19 may lead disastrous conclusions as work market is shrinking, great demand of people can lose their workplace as a result. In many societies these days, people are concerned about environmental problems. We all know that humanity always harms mother nature. These include dumping of waste in public places, deforestation, the launch of satellites and many toxins emitted by enterprises and vehicles. But, we have questions, if so what will be state of the environment in 2030? Or we can preserve our universe by preventing this, and we protect it? Opinions on the issue are divided, and my own considered thought is that in ten years, today's problems will be resolved and many changes will occur in nature and society. If humanity treats the Earth well, the depletion of the ozone layer, one of the global problems, will be ceased and even be restored. Moreover, problem of the waste products that causes environmental pollution will be solved in all countries, if facilities, which is special reproduced garbage-can, are installed densely populated areas, such as on roads and state and medical institutions. Therefore, it can be said that if we take care of nature, it will also protect us, and in 2030 we live in the pure air and beautiful environment. Another significant aspect is educational matter. On a more personal level, I would say education will be still more improved and changed in a 10-years. It is generally viewed that the educational system is improving the year. As far as I can see attention to the field of education increase, as a result, activities of many educational institutions will have been organized. The knowledge level of young people will be enhanced based on excellent teaching methods, new techniques. To my mind, all technologies will develop on the basis on the top of modern knowledge. In particular, all modern and multistoried buildings, enterprises will be built, much equipment will be created that can meet the needs of people. If we, young people, gain deep knowledge and put them into practice, Uzbekistan will achieve not only in the educational system, but also in multitude of branches. Another the important field is medicine. We can say beyond any doubt that in every country in the world, people's health is more important. Due to today's pandemic, we know the level of medicine, and it became clear that we needed the subsequent development of the medical field. I am sure that this pandemic will also be eradicated. After the COVID19, people's lives begin to change for the better. That is, they begin value life, to give each other more love. Feelings of mutual affection, love, fidelity, respect, trust between people can be further enhanced. Instead of wars, they can create a lot of news, understanding why they live on earth. It Is generally believed that if we draw the right conclusions today and take into account the health of ourselves, our loved families, relations and people, then by 2030 all the necessary conditions for medicine can be created. The later, if I write about my life, I hope to have a favorite profession and a happy family. My parents, relatives, and friends will surround me. If I try, I will achieve my goals, and I will be among the people who have a place in society. What I mean by that is basically, all the things I will manifest in my experience of life. All of my thoughts, feelings, actions, and experiences shape my world. The logical conclusion would be nothing, which can remain in one place forever. Everything will change, will be updated and improved. Tomorrow is better than today. In 2030, many changes will occur in the world and my life. I always ask Allah that by 2030 we will have all achieved health.
Nowadays, the
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world
is changing at an alarming rate. Various inventions are
being created
day by day.
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So
, what will happen in 2030 years? Try to imagine the
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world
in 10 years period. My
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world
in 2030. It is a complicated issue to consider. Tremendous
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changes
we will face up to and how these
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changes
will affect us.
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Now
I try to write my imaginations and I will support my opinion with examples.
Firstly
, we need to
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think
about what aspects our talk should include. In my mind, there are several issues, which are more hot topics as environmental,
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educational
, well-being of
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society
,
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health
care, work market
as well
. A
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good
deal of above mentioned should take into account in a wake of pandemic situation covered the
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world
where we
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live
caused by
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COVID 19
may lead disastrous conclusions as work market is shrinking, great demand of
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people
can lose their workplace
as a result
.

In
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many
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societies
these days,
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people
are concerned
about environmental
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problems
. We all know that humanity always harms mother nature. These include dumping of waste in public places, deforestation, the launch of satellites and
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many
toxins emitted by enterprises and vehicles.
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But
, we have questions, if
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so
what will be state of the environment in 2030? Or we can preserve our universe by preventing this, and we protect it? Opinions on the issue
are divided
, and my
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own
considered
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thought
is that in ten years,
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today
's
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problems
will
be resolved
and
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many
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changes
will occur in nature and
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society
. If humanity treats the Earth well, the depletion of the ozone layer, one of the global
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problems
, will
be ceased
and even
be restored
.
Moreover
,
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problem
of the waste products that causes environmental pollution will
be solved
in all countries, if facilities, which is special reproduced garbage-can,
are installed
densely
populated areas, such as on roads and state and medical institutions.
Therefore
, it can
be said
that if we take care of nature, it will
also
protect us, and in 2030 we
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live
in the pure air and
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beautiful
environment.

Another significant aspect is
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educational
matter. On a more personal level, I would say education will be
still
more
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improved
and
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changed
in a 10-years. It is
generally
viewed that the
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educational
system is improving the
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year
. As far as I can
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see
attention to the field of education increase,
as a result
, activities of
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many
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educational
institutions will have
been organized
. The knowledge level of young
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people
will
be enhanced
based on excellent teaching methods, new techniques. To my mind, all technologies will develop on the basis on the top of modern knowledge.
In particular
, all modern and multistoried buildings, enterprises will
be built
, much equipment will
be created
that can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
meet
the needs of
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people
. If we, young
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people
, gain deep knowledge and put them into practice, Uzbekistan will achieve not
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only
in the
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educational
system,
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but
also
in multitude of branches. Another the
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important
field is medicine. We can say beyond any doubt that in every country in the
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world
,
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people
's
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health
is more
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important
. Due to
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today
's pandemic, we know the level of medicine, and it became
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clear
that we needed the subsequent development of the medical field. I am sure that this pandemic will
also
be eradicated
. After the
Did you mean "COVID-19" or the alternative spelling "Covid-19" (= coronavirus)?
COVID19
,
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people
's
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lives
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begin
to
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change
for the better.
That is
, they
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begin
value
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life
, to give each other more
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love
. Feelings of mutual affection,
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love
, fidelity, respect, trust between
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people
can be
further
enhanced.
Instead
of wars, they can create
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a lot of
news, understanding why they
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live
on earth. It Is
generally
believed that if we draw the right conclusions
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today
and take into account the
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health
of ourselves, our
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loved
families, relations and
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people
, then by 2030 all the necessary conditions for medicine can
be created
.

The
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later
, if I write about my
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life
, I hope to have a favorite profession and a happy family. My parents, relatives, and friends will surround me. If I try, I will achieve my goals, and I will be among the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
who have a place in
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
society
. What I mean by
that is
basically
, all the things I will manifest in my experience of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
life
. All of my thoughts, feelings, actions, and experiences shape my world.

The logical conclusion would be nothing, which can remain in one place forever. Everything will
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change
, will
be updated
and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
improved
. Tomorrow is better than
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today
. In 2030,
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many
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changes
will occur in the
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world
and my
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life
. I always ask Allah that by 2030 we will have all achieved
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health
.
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IELTS essay In 10 years the world will change dramatically.

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
765 words
6.0
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