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Nowadays Importation is a huge business, it is completely associate with economy and is a common practical all around the world. For instance, many countries have a tendency to import food. In my point of view, this trend has the both advantages and disadvantages developments, however, I think there is more advantages. I hardly believe that importing food offer any benefits to the countries. It movements economy and generates many jobs. It gives to consumers variety of foods and a diversity of prices. I see importing as a bridge which connects all countries in the world. In the other hand we have the bad side about the food importation, for example, it can bring some economy problems to the locals. Furthermore, the culture of the nations could be affected by the importations. The other point is that if the quality of that imported one is low, and it is not verified by the authorities it can bring a serie of problems to the consumers, such as a weakening people’s health. In conclusion, bringing these products from outside contributes tho the country in many ways, for example, the variety of products, prices and the economy movement of who is importing e who is exporting.
Nowadays Importation is a huge business, it is completely associate with
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economy
and is a common practical all around the world.
For instance
,
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many
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countries
have a tendency to import
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food
. In my point of view, this trend has the both advantages and disadvantages developments,
however
, I
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think
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there is more advantages
.

I hardly believe that importing
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food
offer any benefits to the
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countries
.
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It movements
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economy
and generates
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many
jobs. It gives to consumers variety of
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foods
and a diversity of prices. I
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see
importing as a bridge which connects all
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countries
in the world.

In the other hand we have the
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bad
side about the
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food
importation,
for example
, it can bring
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some
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economy
problems to the locals.
Furthermore
, the culture of the nations could be
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affected
by the importations. The other point is that if the quality of that imported one is low, and it is not verified by the authorities it can bring a
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serie
of problems to the consumers, such as a weakening
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people
’s health.

In conclusion
, bringing these products from outside contributes tho the
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country
in
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many
ways,
for example
, the variety of products, prices and the
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economy
movement of who is importing e who is exporting.
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IELTS essay importing food of other countries

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
203 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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