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three strengths and three weakness

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Honestly, my shortcomings are probably too many to mention. First of all, I have never been please about myself, that is the reason why I'm unconfident, and have numerous difficulties when speaking in public or striking up a conversation with someones as well as expressing my ideas. Moreover, I frequently linger everything untill the last minute, so I am often stressed by deadline, I am trying my best to improve it, even though there is not much progress. Besides, although I chose the major of business, My natural science is not good enough especially math, and I am not good at English too. A lot of times I can not understand what the professor said. However, in my view, I also have some strong points, although it is insignificant. I'm an enthusiasm girl, I am ready to help anyone when they need and smile with someone I met on the road. My mom often said I'm patient, because she rarely sees I get angry, and I think it is right. In addition, the one of my really advantage is multilingual when I can speak two other hieroglyphics like Chinese and Japanese.
Honestly
, my shortcomings are
probably
too
many
to mention.
First of all
, I have never been
please
about myself,
that is
the reason why I'm unconfident, and have numerous difficulties when speaking in public or striking up a conversation with someones
as well
as expressing my
ideas
.
Moreover
, I
frequently
linger everything
untill
the last minute,
so
I am
often
stressed
by deadline, I am trying my best to
improve
it,
even though
there is not much progress.
Besides
, although I chose the major of business, My natural science is not
good
enough
especially
math, and I am not
good
at English too.
A lot of
times I can not understand what the professor said.
However
, in my view, I
also
have
some
strong points, although it is insignificant. I'm an enthusiasm girl, I am ready to
help
anyone when they need and smile with someone I met on the road. My mom
often
said I'm patient,
because
she rarely
sees
I
get
angry, and I
think
it is right.
In addition
, the one of my
really
advantage is multilingual when I can speak two other hieroglyphics like Chinese and Japanese.
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IELTS essay three strengths and three weakness

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
191 words
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5.0
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