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IMPORTANT OF HIGHER EDUCATION

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A person chooses higher education when he wishes to specialize in his study stream. Prosperous career, financial and higher growth opportunities are some of the benefits of higher education. With higher education, a person becomes more employable with specialized skills and is likely to live a happier and stress-free life. Highly educated citizens tend to be more involved in community building activities and have a greater sense of discipline and accomplishment. Higher education provides a gateway to a number of opportunities in the future. Higher education equips a man with the specialized skills required to earn higher efficiency levels at the workplace, gives an equal space in this competing world, improves skills and provides scope for better serving our community and working towards its development. The main goal of education is to provide a direction and purpose to one’s life. So if you aim to go far in that chosen direction, you need to set the stage for achieving higher education for yourself. These extra skills are gained by putting in your time and energy in a course that gives you extra edge to soar higher in your career ladder. In short, the more you study, the more you broaden your horizon and hence your perspective undergoes a serious transformation. A person who has completed higher education certainly has a better perspective and ideas to help in community and societal development and has the capability to build a citizen friendly nation. So it is never too late to start the journey of higher education
A person chooses higher
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when he wishes to specialize in his study stream. Prosperous career, financial and higher growth opportunities are
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some of the
benefits of higher
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education
. With higher
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, a person becomes more employable with specialized
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skills
and is likely to
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live
a happier and
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-free life.
Highly
educated citizens tend to be more involved in community building activities and have a greater sense of discipline and accomplishment.

Higher
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provides a gateway to a number of opportunities in the future. Higher
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education
equips a
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man
with the specialized
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required to earn higher efficiency levels at the workplace, gives an equal space in this competing world,
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improves
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skills
and provides scope for better serving our community and working towards its development.

The main goal of
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education
is to provide a direction and purpose to one’s life.
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So
if you aim to go far in that chosen direction, you need to set the stage for achieving higher
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education
for yourself. These extra
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skills
are gained
by putting in your time and energy in a course that gives you extra edge to soar higher in your career ladder.

In short, the more you study, the more you broaden your horizon and
hence
your perspective undergoes a serious transformation. A person who has completed higher
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education
certainly
has a better perspective and
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to
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help
in community and societal development and has the capability to build a citizen friendly nation.
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it is never too late to
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the journey of higher
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education
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IELTS essay IMPORTANT OF HIGHER EDUCATION

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
253 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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