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My ideal office would have an ocean view, minimal furniture, natural light coming in, and little or no noise. It should have two desks - one would be facing away from a large glass window so that I could enjoy the view. There is a bookshelf nearby that I could take down books for later reading. The other desk, on which, I would have a computer, a printer, a fax machine and so on, would be placed against the wall. I would like it to be a simple desk without too much clutter so I can focus on my work. I’d also want comfortable chairs to sit in when I’m working long hours. Other facilities may include a picture, a plant, a curtain and a large open space to make my ideal office more perfect. I do dream that one day, I would be able to work in such a ideal office which I just described above.
My ideal office would have an ocean view, minimal furniture, natural light coming in, and
little
or no noise. It should have two desks
-
one would be facing away from a large glass window
so
that I could enjoy the view. There is a bookshelf nearby that I could take down books for later reading. The other desk, on which, I would have a computer, a printer, a fax machine and
so
on, would
be placed
against the wall. I would like it to be a simple desk without too much clutter
so
I can focus on my work. I’d
also
want comfortable chairs to sit in when I’m working long hours. Other facilities may include a picture, a plant, a curtain and a large open space to
make
my ideal office more perfect. I do dream that one day, I would be able to work in such
a
ideal office which I
just
described
above.
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IELTS essay describe your ideal office

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
157 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 5.5
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