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importance of animal conservation and measures

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Today, the world is facing one of the biggest environmental concerns. Animal extinction and destruction of habitats due to forest destruction, urbanization and illicit hunting are a primordial problem. The importance of animal conservation is crucial and several measures could be implemented to deal with issue. Wildlife conservation is essential for two main reasons. Firstly, animals form part of a complex homeostasis in diverse environments. The presence of wildlife in forest and seas form part of a delicate and unique life cycle, the interruption of any roles might bring catastrophic consequences to our systems. For example, the importance of bees has been studied for decades. It is known that the extinction of these insects, could bring the world to starvation, this is because bees are considered essential for pollination. Furthermore, animals are essential for the future, as they form part of evolution to continue to develop species diversity. As some biologists have claimed, the conservation of species such as monkeys is fundamental to study evolution. Several individual, national and global measures should be immediate to contrasts animal extinction. Law enforcement should be strict for illegal animal and wood commerce. Those activities should be prohibited and severely punished to discourage the practise. For instance, some countries have implemented life sentence for illegal animal hunting. Conservation should be encouraged by national and international governments. Furthermore, a considerate percentage of national budgets could be destinated for the promotion of animal sanctuaries and protected natural areas. In conclusion, the conservation of wildlife is vital for our world, because animals play an important role in environment. National and international efforts should be guided for animal conservation.
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Animal
extinction and destruction of habitats due to forest destruction, urbanization and illicit hunting are a primordial problem. The importance of
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animal
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conservation
is crucial and several measures could
be implemented
to deal with issue.

Wildlife
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conservation
is essential for two main reasons.
Firstly
,
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animals
form part of a complex homeostasis in diverse environments. The presence of wildlife in forest and seas form part of a delicate and unique life cycle, the interruption of any roles might bring catastrophic
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consequences to
our systems.
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been studied
for decades. It
is known
that the extinction of these insects, could bring the world to starvation, this is
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because
bees
are considered
essential for pollination.
Furthermore
,
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animals
are essential for the future, as they form part of evolution to continue to develop species diversity. As
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some
biologists have claimed, the
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conservation
of species such as monkeys is fundamental to study evolution.

Several individual,
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national
and global measures should be immediate to contrasts
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animal
extinction. Law enforcement should be strict for illegal
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animal
and wood commerce. Those activities should
be prohibited
and
severely
punished to discourage the
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practise
.
For instance
,
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some
countries have implemented life sentence for illegal
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animal
hunting.
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Conservation
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by
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national
and international
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governments
.
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, a considerate percentage of
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national
budgets could be
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destinated
for the promotion of
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animal
sanctuaries and protected natural areas.

In conclusion
, the
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conservation
of wildlife is vital for our world,
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because
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animals
play an
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important
role in environment.
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National
and international efforts should
be guided
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animal
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conservation
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IELTS essay importance of animal conservation and measures

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
271 words
6.0
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