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immigration has major impact on society. what are the reasons for this. Give the consequnces of this trend.

immigration has major impact on society. what are the reasons for this. Give the consequnces of this trend. 0pm8Q
impacted by immigration. Every year, the number of people moving to different countries increases continuously. This essay will describe how job opportunities and urge for civil security encourages migrants to move and how their life changes economically as well as emotionally thereafter. There have been numerous number of reasons as to why people tend to change their homeland. Firstly, residents of under-developed nations strive to look for career opportunities in developing or developed countries. This happens because of the urge to increase the standard of living. For instance, there is enough evidence to support that the nurses in the Philippines move to Canada and America, as soon as they finish their diploma because of higher pay and increased job reputation. As a result, nurses achieve their futuristic goals by immigrating to a country where they are valued more. Secondly, people are frustrated with revolutions and wars being declared domestically as well as internationally. People crave for peace and thus, migrate to countries that maintain good relations with other regions of the world. As an example, intercultural riots in India in 2016 increased the number of Indian residents moving abroad to 25%. This resulted in the movement of most of the young talent to other countries, who would otherwise contribute to the country’s GDP. However, immigration can also lead to several problems for the people as well as the institutions involved. In terms of macro-economics, people migrating to the other economy, increase the responsibility of the foreign government with respect to health, food, housing and so on. This might also result in overpopulation, along with an increase in pollution level, high competition in the job market and opposition from the citizens. Additionally, language barriers and acceptance in a foreign land makes the immigrant feel unsupported and lonely. Thereby leading to depression, homesickness and other mental disruptions that humans come across when they come across a lot of strangers. In conclusion, there can be positive as well as the negative side of immigrating to a completely different part of the world. Better work opportunities might come up as the most feasible option, but there are more valuable social connections in the home country which are not worth losing.
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impacted
by immigration. Every year, the number of
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people
moving to
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different
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countries
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increases
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. This essay will
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describe
how job opportunities and urge for civil security encourages migrants to
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move
and how their life
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changes
economically
as
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well
as
emotionally
thereafter.

There have been numerous number of reasons as to why
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people
tend to
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change
their homeland.
Firstly
, residents of under-developed nations strive to look for career opportunities in developing or developed
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countries
. This happens
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because
of the urge to
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increase
the standard of living.
For instance
, there is
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enough
evidence to support that the nurses in the Philippines
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move
to Canada and America, as
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soon
as they finish their diploma
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because
of higher pay and increased job reputation.
As a result
, nurses achieve their futuristic goals by immigrating to a
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country
where they
are valued
more.
Secondly
,
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people
are frustrated
with revolutions and wars
being declared
domestically
as
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well
as
internationally
.
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People
crave for peace and
thus
, migrate to
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countries
that maintain
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good
relations with
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other
regions of the world. As an example, intercultural riots in India in 2016 increased the number of Indian residents moving abroad to 25%. This resulted in the movement of most of the young talent to
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other
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countries
, who would
otherwise
contribute to the
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country’s
GDP.

However
, immigration can
also
lead to several problems for the
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people
as
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well
as the institutions involved. In terms of macro-economics,
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people
migrating to the
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other
economy,
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increase
the responsibility of the foreign
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government
with respect to health, food, housing and
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so
on. This might
also
result in overpopulation, along with an
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increase
in pollution level, high competition in the job market and opposition from the citizens.
Additionally
, language barriers and acceptance in a foreign land
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makes
the immigrant feel unsupported and lonely. Thereby leading to depression, homesickness and
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other
mental disruptions that humans
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come
across when they
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come
across
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a lot of
strangers.

In conclusion
, there can be
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positive
as
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well
as the
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negative
side of immigrating to a completely
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different
part of the world. Better work opportunities might
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come
up as the most feasible option,
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but
there are more valuable social connections in the home
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country
which are not worth losing.
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IELTS essay immigration has major impact on society. what are the reasons for this. Give the consequnces of this trend.

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  American English
4 paragraphs
366 words
6.5
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