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Imagine you are giving a land to use as you wish. How will you use the land?

Imagine you are giving a land to use as you wish. How will you use the land? g5Kkl
Land is the most profitable assets from the four means of production. If I am giving a land to use as I like, I will use it as follows: Firstly, I will use it for agribusiness like turkey, broilers, goat and so on. Without food, no one can survive, many people in my village has assess to market every four four days. By creating this in my village will make life comfortable for them. Secondly, I will plant cassava, maize on it because my village people like yam flour and with this near to them, they will be satisfied. Conclusively,
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as I like, I will
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it as follows:
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it for agribusiness like turkey, broilers, goat and
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on. Without food, no one can survive,
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in my village has
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to market every
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four four
days. By creating this in my village will
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life comfortable for them.
Secondly
, I will plant cassava, maize on it
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my village
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people
like yam flour and with this near to them, they will
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IELTS essay Imagine you are giving a land to use as you wish. How will you use the land?

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  American English
1 paragraphs
100 words
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