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Paragraph about the advantages of living in a small community

Paragraph about the advantages of living in a small community Nr07y

I believe there were three main benefits. The first advantage of living in a small village is that the atmosphere was very clear and fresh. People will feel more at ease and healthier which will help to limit respiratory diseases. Another positive aspect of living in a small village is they always support and helped each other when having problems because people who lived in a small community tended to have a strong brotherhood. Last but not least, people living in a small suburb had a pleasant and unhurried pace of life because they worked to meet their basic needs only such as food, shelter, clothing and so on. Their way of life, in my opinion, was more relaxed.

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small
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very
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clear
 and fresh. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
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 and healthier

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help
 to limit respiratory diseases. Another This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:beneficial
positive
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small
 village is they always support and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assisted
helped
 each other when having problems This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because


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people
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lived
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small
 community tended to have a strong brotherhood. Last

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but
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people
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small
 suburb had a pleasant and unhurried pace of life

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because
 they worked to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :attain
meet
 their basic needs This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 such as food, shelter, clothing and This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 on. Their way of life, in my opinion, was more relaxed. 