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very country in the world faces the challenges of climate change.

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One of the biggest problems that we face up with is the climate change. Right now, pollution levels are extremly hight and unless we do not become aware of the Three R´s, recycle, reduce and reuse; the world will end up to be devastated. Firstly, is important that people take up using renewable energy, with it, we will succeed in reusing and reducing, which means that the use of fossil fuels and exhaust fumes will decrease and we could easily carry out with the new renewable energy such as the solar. Secondly, recycling issues are getting slightly reduce thanks to those people who have become concious of the amount of problems that it cause. For instance, many companies have changed their way of packing the products, instead of using plastic, they use paper. However, many citizens still thinking that recycling is not as a terrible problem as experts say. As we have seen, renewable energy and recycling have a lot in common with the Three R´s. Nevertheless, one of them is in tauch with two of the R´s. Consecuently, using renewable energy would be more helpful whether we want to reduce the climate changed.
One of the biggest problems that we face up with is the climate
change
. Right
now
, pollution levels are
extremly
hight
and unless we do not become aware of the Three R´s, recycle,
reduce
and reuse; the world will
end
up to
be devastated
.

Firstly
, is
important
that
people
take up using
renewable
energy
, with it, we will succeed in reusing and reducing, which means that the
use
of fossil fuels and exhaust fumes will
decrease and
we could
easily
carry out with the new
renewable
energy
such as the solar.

Secondly
, recycling issues are getting
slightly
reduce
thanks to those
people
who have become
concious
of the amount of problems that it cause.
For instance
,
many
companies
have
changed
their way of packing the products,
instead
of using plastic, they
use
paper.
However
,
many
citizens
still
thinking that recycling is not as a terrible problem as experts say.

As we have
seen
,
renewable
energy
and recycling have a lot in common with the Three R´s.
Nevertheless
, one of them is in
tauch
with two of the R´s.
Consecuently
, using
renewable
energy
would be more helpful whether we want to
reduce
the climate
changed
.
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IELTS essay very country in the world faces the challenges of climate change.

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