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Imagine you are a tour guide in your country. Write about some places that you would recommend for tourists to visit and explian why.

Imagine you are a tour guide in your country. Write about some places that you would recommend for tourists to visit and explian why. M3WVp
India is a diverse country. I belong to India. There are plenty of tourist destinations feasible in India. I recommend the most renowned place Agra as it is famous for Taj Mahal. Moreover, Agra is the city of love and history; that is why, it is most suitable for young as well as for children. Further, the Golden Temple that is situated in Amritsar; it is a famous religious place. Also, Virasat e khalsa; it is a tourist sport; it shows the sikh religion. Beside this, there are Red fort, Hawa Mahal and so on. According to my perception, all these places depict the Indian history and distinct religion.
India is a diverse country. I belong to India. There are
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plenty
of tourist destinations feasible in India. I recommend the most renowned place Agra as it is
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famous
for Taj Mahal.
Moreover
, Agra is the city of
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love
and history;
that is
why, it is most suitable for young
as well
as for children.
Further
, the Golden Temple that
is situated
in Amritsar; it is a
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famous
religious place.
Also
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e
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khalsa
; it is a tourist sport; it
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shows
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sikh
religion. Beside this, there
are Red
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on. According to my perception, all these places depict the Indian history and distinct religion.

IELTS essay Imagine you are a tour guide in your country. Write about some places that you would recommend for tourists to visit and explian why.

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