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A lot of things happened to me between the ages

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A lot of things happened to me between the ages of three and eighteen. There are moments when I'm happy and times when I'm sad, and there are a few things that I can't seem to forget. But I'm a touch unlucky in that my life's highlights have generally been sad stories. The first two unforgettable memories I have are from when I was approximately 3 to 4 years old, when I unintentionally dropped a wooden watch on me and the second time when I was clinging to the back chair. The wooden chair collapsed on me. Both of those early traumas left an indelible scar on me. Fortunately, the third highlight of my life is a good story. When I was in grade 12 (only last year), I tried to study and concentrated heavily on three subjects: math, physics, and English. When I received my test results, all three topics received 8 points and the most surprising thing was my 8. 5 in philology, despite the fact that I didn't research it but merely read books.
A lot of
things happened to me between the ages of three and eighteen. There are moments when I'm happy and times when I'm sad, and there are a few things that I can't seem to forget.
But
I'm a touch unlucky in that my life's highlights have
generally
been sad stories. The
first
two unforgettable memories I have are from when I was approximately 3 to 4 years
old
, when I
unintentionally
dropped a wooden
watch
on me and the second time when I was clinging to the back chair. The wooden chair collapsed on me. Both of those early traumas
left
an indelible scar on me.
Fortunately
, the third highlight of my life is a
good
story. When I was in grade 12 (
only
last year), I tried to study and concentrated
heavily
on three subjects: math, physics, and English. When I received my
test
results, all three topics received 8 points and the most surprising thing was my 8. 5 in philology, despite the fact that I didn't research it
but
merely
read books.
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IELTS essay A lot of things happened to me between the ages

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
177 words
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5.0
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