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Imagine that you only have one year left to live. How would you spend that time? Write a bucket list (6 sentences).

Imagine that you only have one year left to live. How would you spend that time? Write a bucket list (6 sentences). 0nbBQ
If I had one year left to live, I would spend the year with my family. If I had one year left to live, I would spend it with the people closest to me and live life as I do now. I would go on trips to some of the countries I love and see friends who live far away. If I had a year to live, I would take some time to try to restore the relationships I have damaged. I would have several sit-down conversations with friends and loved ones and have one last laugh, cry and air grievances. I would forgive and ask for my own forgiveness. If I had a year to live, I would thank the many people who have taught me along the way. I would tell them what a profound impact they have had on my life and how grateful I am that they have been in my life. If I had a year to live, I would acquire the services of a good therapist. I know that depression and/or anxiety and/or panic may come up sometime near the end of my life and I would like to have someone's help in dealing with any feelings I may experience. Finally, I would find out why exactly I only had a year to live. If it was due to a disease, I should keep hoping to be alive as long as possible and look for a cure in every way possible.
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with my family.

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life as I do
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countries I
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friends who
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far away.

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time to try to restore the relationships I have damaged. I would have several sit-down conversations with friends and
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ones and have one last laugh, cry and air grievances. I would forgive and
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forgiveness.

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, I would thank the
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who have taught me along the way. I would
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them what a profound impact they have had on my life and how grateful I am that they have been in my life.

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to
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, I would acquire the services of a
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therapist. I know that depression and/or anxiety and/or panic may
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up sometime near the
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of my life and I would like to have someone's
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in dealing with any feelings I may experience.

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hoping to be alive as long as possible and look for a cure in every way possible.
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IELTS essay Imagine that you only have one year left to live. How would you spend that time? Write a bucket list (6 sentences).

Essay
  American English
7 paragraphs
247 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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