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Imagine that you are in a classroom or a meeting. The teacher or the meeting says something incorrect in your opinion, which of the following is best thing to do? 1-Interrupt and correct the mistake right away2-Wait until the class or meeting is over and t v.3

Imagine that you are in a classroom or a meeting. The teacher or the meeting says something incorrect in your opinion, which of the following is best thing to do? 1-Interrupt and correct the mistake right away2-Wait until the class or meeting is over and t v. 3
Advancements in technology have changed the way we interact with one another. People often debate whether this development has any negative impact on relationships. Although technology has some negative aspects, its impact on our lives has been largely positive. The most important benefit of advanced communication tools is that they enable us to receive instant replies from the other person. Earlier, people had to wait for a longer time to get a reply from the other person. However, with the advances of technology, an individual can communicate from any corner of the world without any interference or dependency on others. For example, the postman used to take days to deliver messages from sender to receiver because that message had to physically travel from its source to the destination. However, same message could be delivered instantly to the other person through digital applications like WhatsApp and Skype. On the other hand, there is an argument that new age technologies have made people less sociable. They do not interact with their family members or neighbours because they are busy communicating with their virtual friends on Facebook or Twitter. This is certainly an alarming development. Even so, these applications help people to remain in contact with each other even if they are located in faraway places. Using services like Facebook or Instagram, we can keep ourselves updated about the happenings in the lives This is because these platforms provide all the updates about the individual events in life like birthday, hobbies and many others, and these offer an opportunity to the people to interact with one another. By contrast, this was not possible in earlier years, because as a human one cannot remember every aspect of others’ life. Hence, these technologies have brought people closer than before. In conclusion, new communication tools have certainly made people less sociable; however, they also allow us to stay in constant touch with our near and dear ones wherever they may be. In my opinion, if these tools are used responsibly, they are a boon to mankind.
Advancements in
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technology
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changed
the way we interact with one another.
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People
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often
debate whether this development has any
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negative
impact on relationships. Although
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technology
has
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some
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negative
aspects, its impact on our
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lives
has been
largely
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positive
. The most
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important
benefit of advanced communication tools is that they enable us to receive instant replies from the
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other
person.

Earlier,
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people
had to wait for a longer time to
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get
a reply from the
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other
person.
However
, with the advances of
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technology
, an individual can communicate from any corner of the world without any interference or dependency on others.
For example
, the postman
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used
to take days to deliver messages from sender to receiver
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because
that message had to
physically
travel from its source to the destination.
However
, same message could
be delivered
instantly
to the
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other
person through digital applications like WhatsApp and Skype.

On the
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other
hand, there is an argument that new age
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technologies
have made
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people
less sociable. They do not interact with their family members or
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because
they are busy communicating with their virtual friends on Facebook or Twitter. This is
certainly
an alarming development. Even
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so
, these applications
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help
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people
to remain in contact with each
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other
even if they
are located
in faraway places. Using services like Facebook or Instagram, we can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
keep
ourselves updated about the happenings in the
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lives
This is
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because
these platforms provide all the updates about the individual
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events
in life like birthday, hobbies and
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many
others, and these offer an opportunity to the
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people
to interact with one another. By contrast, this was not possible in earlier years,
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because
as a human one cannot remember every aspect of others’ life.
Hence
, these
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technologies
have brought
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people
closer than
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before
.

In conclusion
, new communication tools have
certainly
made
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people
less sociable;
however
, they
also
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allow
us to stay in constant touch with our near and dear ones wherever they may be. In my opinion, if these tools are
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
used
responsibly
, they are a boon to mankind.
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7.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7.5Mistakes

IELTS essay Imagine that you are in a classroom or a meeting. The teacher or the meeting says something incorrect in your opinion, which of the following is best thing to do? 1-Interrupt and correct the mistake right away2-Wait until the class or meeting is over and t v. 3

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
340 words
7.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.5
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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