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i’m a student from Kazakhstan and currently sudying allergology-immunology at Karaganda state medical university.

i’m a student from Kazakhstan and currently sudying allergology-immunology at Karaganda state medical university. 9lQnw

i’m a student from Kazakhstan and currently sudying allergology-immunology at Karaganda state medical university. I`m extremely interested in fundamentals of immunology, in addition it will be beneficial for my work. But I’ve no job of my own to carry the expenses to pay for the certificate of this course. At present, i live only for my scholarship, it is very much difficult for me to gather such amount of money for the certificate. Financial Aid will help me take this course without any adverse impact on my monthly essential needs. So I’m truly in need of this financial aid. I want to take this course as I want to learn. This course will boost my job prospects after graduation from my university. It will help perform better in understanding and treating diverse allergic deseases and give me an edge over my competitors. A verified certificate will attach credibility to the certificate I receive from this course. I plan to complete all assignments on or before time as I have done in previous Signature Track Courses. Also, I intend to participate in Discussion Forums, which I have found to supplement my learning immensely in the other online courses I have taken on Coursera. I also plan to grade assignments that are to peer-reviewed which I believe will an invaluable learning opportunity.

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