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The growth of online shopping will one day lead to all shops in towns and cities closing do you agree or disagree with this opinion give reasons and sport with relevant examples

The growth of online shopping will one day lead to all shops in towns and cities closing with this opinion give reasons and sport with relevant examples 2arnX
In the contemporary era, people become more interested to do shopping Growth in online shopping will one day late all shops in towns and cities closing. This need to be pondered upon in the preceding paragraphs. According to my perspective growth in online shopping will not lead to all shops in town and city is closing. Primarily, numerous people think that quality of products is not checked while online shopping. Besides that, while doing online shopping people do not bargain the prices of the products. However in shop people can bargain. Moreover, those people who are uneducated as well as not know about doing online shopping they will always prefer to go to shops for shopping. On the other hand, first and foremost online shopping is more convenient for busy people who prefer to do online shopping. Moreover, people find more things on one site. they do not have to go to numerous shops. However, increasing online shopping is not mankind's first priority. In the epilogue, it is discerned there are numerous benefits of online shopping yet many people will still prefer to do shopping in shops consequently, advancement in online shopping will not lead to closing shops in towns as well as cities.
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people
become more interested to do
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shopping
Growth in
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online
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shopping
will one day late all
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shops
in towns and cities closing. This need to
be pondered
upon in the preceding paragraphs. According to my perspective growth in
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online
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shopping
will not lead to all
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shops
in town and city is closing.
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people
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think
that quality of products is not
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checked
while
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online
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.
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online
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people
do not bargain the prices of the products.
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shop
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people
can bargain.
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people
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as well
as not know about doing
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online
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shopping
they will always prefer to go to
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shops
for shopping.

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online
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is more convenient for busy
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people
who prefer to do
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online
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shopping
.
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people
find more things on one site.
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.
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shopping
is not mankind's
first
priority.

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is discerned
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online
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yet
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in
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shops
consequently
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online
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shopping
will not lead to closing
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shops
in towns
as well
as cities.
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IELTS essay The growth of online shopping will one day lead to all shops in towns and cities closing with this opinion give reasons and sport with relevant examples

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
204 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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