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Illustration of the Inside a Vacuum Cleaner

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A vacuum cleaner is a machine for clean the carpets in the home. There are main parts: a handle on the top, a body, and a bae that holds an electric motor and routing brush. In the base part, there is an intake port, and the coating brush is in the intake port. When you try to clean your carpet, dust go into the intake port, and go to the electric motor which is driven a fan with angled blades. After the blades turn, the dust is go up through a rubber tube which is located next to the fan. The dust enters the dust bag in the upright body of the vacuum cleaner. The filter and exhaust port is center of the dust bag. The air passes through the filter and out of the exhaust port.
A vacuum cleaner is a machine for clean the carpets in the home. There are main parts: a handle on the top, a body, and a
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bae
that holds an electric motor and routing brush. In the base part, there is an intake
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port
, and the coating brush is in the intake
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port
. When you try to clean your carpet,
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dust
go into the intake
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port
, and go to the electric motor which
is driven
a fan with angled blades. After the blades turn, the
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dust
is
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go
up through a rubber tube which
is located
next
to the fan. The
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dust
enters the
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dust
bag in the upright body of the vacuum cleaner. The filter and exhaust
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port
is center of the
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dust
bag.
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The
air passes through the filter and out of the exhaust
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port
.
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IELTS essay Illustration of the Inside a Vacuum Cleaner

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
137 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 7.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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