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Describe to complain about the service car

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I am writing to complain about the service. I repaired my car before 2 days ago at your service office. First day my car was very comfortable for drive. So i was satisfied your service but after 2 day my car is not very well. I know again its motor is not work good. Due to it has strange voice is from the motor. If i drive fast the motor is becoming hot then I forced turn off my car. Also i mentioned the window cleaner was not work. I requisted repaired it from you but it is not work too. However, I think your servants are incapable their work. Now i want to refund. As a regular customer of yours i feel disappointed with the way I have been treated and hope that steps will be taken to rectify the situation. I trust this matter will reseive your immediate attention.
I am writing to complain about the service. I repaired my
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2 days ago at your service office.
First
day my
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car
was
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very
comfortable for drive.
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So
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i
was satisfied
your service
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but
after 2 day my
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car
is not
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very
well. I know again its motor is not
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work
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good
. Due to it has strange voice is from the motor. If
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i
drive
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fast
the motor is becoming hot then I forced turn off my
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car
.
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Also
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i
mentioned the window cleaner was not
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work
. I
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requisted
repaired it from you
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but
it is not
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work
too.
However
, I
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think
your servants are incapable their
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work
.
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Now
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i
want to refund.

As a regular customer of yours
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i
feel disappointed with the way I have
been treated
and hope that steps will
be taken
to rectify the situation. I trust this matter will
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reseive
your immediate attention.

IELTS essay Describe to complain about the service car

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
151 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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