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Where will you do your activity?

Where will you do your activity? 1ndWX
I want to do this activity nearby my house, or at least in the city where I live. Since even in a central city, there are always have people who can't catch up with the development of this city. Consequently, why each city always has community services to help these people. Sometimes in the news on TV, I have heard about lots of older must selling lottery tickets for a living, or a child left the study go to work and get some money to help their families. So I frequently send books, packaged food, clothes, and blankets for them. Sadly even I joined an organization about helping people, but I can not go out of my city to help others in another suburban, so my choice is donating. These actions not only make me feel helpful but also reminds me how my life is beautiful. I hope no child will be hungry and cold.
I want to do this activity nearby my
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house
, or at least in the city where I
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live
. Since even in a central city, there are always have
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people
who can't catch up with the development of this city.
Consequently
, why each city always has community services to
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help
these
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people
.
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Sometimes
in the news on TV, I have heard about lots of older
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must
selling lottery tickets for a living, or a child
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left
the study go to work and
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get
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some
money to
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help
their families.
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So
I
frequently
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send
books, packaged food, clothes, and blankets for them.
Sadly
even I
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joined
an organization about helping
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people
,
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but
I can not go out of my city to
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help
others in another suburban,
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so
my choice is donating. These actions not
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only
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make
me feel helpful
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but
also
reminds me how my life is
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beautiful
. I hope no child will be hungry and
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cold
.
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IELTS essay Where will you do your activity?

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
155 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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