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If you have a chance could you like to change something in your hometown on syrup actually if I have a chace, I would like to cut off the amount of emissions by encouraging people to use public transport. The first reason is my hometown is always in serious pollution problems. Additionally there are many transport like motorbike, car so they often cause traffic jams in the rush hour. Using public transport not only cut off the amount of transports, but also reduce the traffic jams situations.

If you have a chance could you like to change something in your hometown on syrup actually if I have a chace, I would like to cut off the amount of emissions by encouraging people to use public transport. The first reason is my hometown is always in serious pollution problems. Additionally there are many transport like motorbike, car so they often cause traffic jams in the rush hour. Using public transport not only cut off the amount of transports, but also reduce the traffic jams situations. 1m8NW
If you have a chance could you like to change something in your hometown on syrup actually if I have a chace, I would like to cut off the amount of emissions by encouraging people to use public transport. The first reason is my hometown is always in serious pollution problems. Additionally there are many transport like motorbike, car so they often cause traffic jams in the rush hour. Using public transport not only cut off the amount of transports, but also reduce the traffic jams situations.
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transport like motorbike, car
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cause traffic jams in the rush hour.

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IELTS essay If you have a chance could you like to change something in your hometown on syrup actually if I have a chace, I would like to cut off the amount of emissions by encouraging people to use public transport. The first reason is my hometown is always in serious pollution problems. Additionally there are many transport like motorbike, car so they often cause traffic jams in the rush hour. Using public transport not only cut off the amount of transports, but also reduce the traffic jams situations.

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87 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
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