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Air pollution is the cause of many bad issues and Events

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Air pollution is very bad for people When air pollution in our country all people get sick People do not have fersh because they trees produce fersh air for us All the trees absorb the dirty air and produce feresh air for us ln order not to pollute the air you should not burn all kinds of waste Tor example in autumn you should not burn trees after their leves have fallen If we burn them the polluted air in the leaves spreads to nature Therefore we should not burn them We need to planet more trees We need to take care of them
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IELTS essay Air pollution is the cause of many bad issues and Events

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
103 words
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4.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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