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A number of people believe that its essential to construct new construction rather than wasting money on preserving ancient ones

A number of people believe that its essential to construct new construction rather than wasting money on preserving ancient ones RWEYQ
A number of people believe that its essential to construct new construction rather than wasting money on preserving ancient ones Currently, people have forgotten to think about the history of their country and they don’t know what role history plays in their lives and because of this it’s easy for them to replace that places with some modern buildings. However due to the important buildings such as Oxford or Cambridge university we can understand that this historical heritage is very significant for government. They have replaced the inside of these buildings with modern equipment and they spent lots of money to protect that environment. Eventually, culture depends on history. in my opinion, countries should take into account the importance of old buildings and the accessibility to old places
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believe that its essential to construct new construction
rather
than wasting money on preserving ancient ones

Currently
,
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people
have forgotten to
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think
about the history of their
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country and
they don’t know what role history plays in their
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lives
and
because of this
it’s easy for them to replace that places with
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some
modern
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buildings
.
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However
due to the
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important
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buildings
such as Oxford or Cambridge university we can understand that this historical heritage is
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very
significant for
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government
. They have replaced the inside of these
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buildings
with modern
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equipment and
they spent lots of money to protect that environment.

Eventually
, culture depends on history.
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in
my opinion, countries should take into account the importance of
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old
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buildings
and the accessibility to
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old
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places

IELTS essay A number of people believe that its essential to construct new construction rather than wasting money on preserving ancient ones

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
127 words
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