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A number of people believe that its essential to construct new construction rather than wasting money on preserving ancient ones

A number of people believe that its essential to construct new construction rather than wasting money on preserving ancient ones RWEYQ

A number of people believe that its essential to construct new construction rather than wasting money on preserving ancient ones Currently, people have forgotten to think about the history of their country and they don’t know what role history plays in their lives and because of this it’s easy for them to replace that places with some modern buildings. However due to the important buildings such as Oxford or Cambridge university we can understand that this historical heritage is very significant for government. They have replaced the inside of these buildings with modern equipment and they spent lots of money to protect that environment. Eventually, culture depends on history. in my opinion, countries should take into account the importance of old buildings and the accessibility to old places

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people
 believe that its essential to construct new construction rather
 than wasting money on preserving ancient ones

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think
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lives
 and because of this
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some
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buildings
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However
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important
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buildings
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very
 significant for This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :national authoritypublic authority
government
. They have replaced the inside of these You use this word too often, consider replacing it withhuthouseconstructionarchitecturehome
buildings
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equipment and
 they spent lots of money to protect that environment.

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, culture depends on history. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterIn
in
 my opinion, countries should take into account the importance of This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ancientagedmature
old
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buildings
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