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If you had a chance, would you like to change something in your hometown?

If you had a chance, would you like to change something in your hometown? 5AE5m

I think I would like to change their attitude to education which I believe will be a huge transformation for all individuals' lives as well as society. In light of the fact that a civilized nation then each single citizen has knowledge. So, education change will make for a nation change from that the country will have quality human resources to help change society and people's lives. For example, H’Hen Niê, who took on the top 5 Miss Universe, the biggest beauty pageant in the world, is clearly proof about education. In front of a poor family, when she was 15 years old her parents talked her into marriage, but no, her choice was education. From nothing, now, she is one of the most influential people who has influence on young people. Especially, thanks to her education, her and her family's life has become better.

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