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How the office affect the life

How the office affect the life MoKq9
The home office service has been one of the most famous subjects discussed nowadays, behind of pandemic and vacine of course. It has came out with a lot of analysis and psycologist studies about how this new away of performing works, virtually present, can affect and impact each individual. At one side we have the very known benefits of being at home and more close to family. Instead of being stuck at traffic jam for hours as happen with big metropoles emploees, the majority of the work force is extending the sleeping time, getting up from the bed and going straigh foward to front of PC to take a virtual meeting or even better, taking advance of those free hours to go out to a walking with pet or a morning running in front of the beach. Things impossible to do a year an a half ago. On the other hand we have the onus to our brain which cannot distinguish the professional fisical space from what is the personal life fisical space, being the kitchen or the bedroom the best corner to sit and take the virtual meeting. In accordance to specialist reaserches it has highly impacted the time balance between professional and personal life time. Unfortunatelly, the consequence of such hard period that has been this pandemic period will be more and more noticed as soon as the time goes!
The home office service has been one of the most
famous
subjects discussed nowadays, behind of pandemic and
vacine
of course
. It has
came
out with
a lot of
analysis and
psycologist
studies about how this new away of performing works,
virtually
present, can affect and impact each individual. At one side we have the
very known
benefits of being at home and more close to family.
Instead
of
being stuck
at traffic jam for hours as happen with
big
metropoles
emploees
, the majority of the work force is extending the sleeping
time
, getting up from the bed and going
straigh
foward
to front of PC to take a virtual meeting or even better, taking advance of those free hours to go out to a walking with pet or a morning running in front of the beach. Things impossible to do a year
an a
half ago.
On the other hand
we have the onus to our brain which cannot distinguish the professional
fisical
space from what is the personal life
fisical
space, being the kitchen or the bedroom the best corner to sit and take the virtual meeting. In accordance to specialist
reaserches
it has
highly
impacted the
time
balance between professional and personal life
time
.
Unfortunatelly
, the consequence of such
hard
period that has been this pandemic period will be more and more noticed as
soon
as the
time
goes!
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IELTS essay How the office affect the life

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232 words
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