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Education in the future How different will education be in the future? For example, will students go to a school to study, or will they do online lessons at home? Will students study the same subjects as they do now? Why?

Education in the future How different will education be in the future? For example, will students go to a school to study, or will they do online lessons at home? Will students study the same subjects as they do now? Why? 8QELl
Education has been a key of the future life from decades and Today education still has the premium place in the world. technology is assisting today's education where some people learn online and feel comfortable due to the fact that they are able to do manage the time. As technology advances the new study subject will born and people will be busy so that they can't have time to go and seat in classes. This takes us to the view that students will study different lessons and overall, students will enjoy online lesson as it will seem the most important.
Education has been a key of the future life from decades and
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learn online and feel comfortable due to the fact that they are able to do manage the time.

As technology advances the new study subject will
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will be busy
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that they can't have time to go and seat in classes.

This takes us to the view that students will study
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IELTS essay Education in the future How different will education be in the future? For example, will students go to a school to study, or will they do online lessons at home? Will students study the same subjects as they do now? Why?

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  American English
4 paragraphs
100 words
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4.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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