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Some points should be talked about here about whether tourism is beneficial for countries. Firstly, we should separate the effects of taking tourists in just for traveling, into two groups. Those are “advantages” and “disadvantages”. To start with the good sides, I believe that tourism is the best way to have good relationships with other countries culturally, diplomatically and even more economically. All we know is that “what comes around, goes around. ” Having better communications makes it easier to solve problems. Additionally, cultural interaction, representing our culture are the other benefits of tourism. On another hand, having more pollution, traffic, and crime because of the crowd is something that can not be ignored. To summarize, tourism should be in our lives but there must be rules to protect people and their rights. Furthermore, tourism shouldn’t be seen as the only way but it should be considered as a good way.

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tourism
 is beneficial for countries.

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tourism
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tourism
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