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When it comes to an exquisite city, i would like to go for Sai Gon City without doubt. This place is home for more than 8 million residents, which is located in the south-eastern region of Viet Nam. There is an abundance of reasons of my prefertence for Sai Gon than others cities. First reason, it has uncountable futuristic buildings and attractions such as Bitexco Tower, Binh Tay Market, Sai Gon Opera House, . . . Second reason, I am a huge fan of banh mi and banh mi in sai gon taste so delectable. You can find out banh mi wherever in Sai Gon effortlessly. Third reason, there is a variety of recreational activities to do such as visit place of interest, try fast food, walk around with your friends, . . . Last reason, the residents are kind of amiable. In conclusion, Sai gon is a worth-visiting city that you should pay a visit once in life.
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IELTS essay describe a beautiful city

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
159 words
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