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If I agree that the success of person is measured according to his salary?

If I agree that the success of person is measured according to his salary? RN7K8

In my country, Indonesia, most people thought having a high salary than others is the first step to be a success. success here in Indonesia means to have a huge house and able to buy car at the same time. I partly agree with the statement that says, successful peoples are always been captured by their salary. while I agree when people that have achieved success in their life have a sufficient money in their banks to use it for travel around the world.

In my country, Indonesia, most This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonedassumedbelievedconsidered
thought
 having a high salary than others is the first
 step to be a success. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterSuccess
success
 here in Indonesia means to have a huge This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residence
house
 and able to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchase
buy
 car at the same time.

I partly This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquiesce
agree
 with the statement that says, successful peoples are always been captured
 by their salary. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterWhile
while
 I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquiesce
agree
 when This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 that have achieved success in their life have Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply "sufficient money".sufficient money
a sufficient money
 in their banks to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
 it for travel around the world. 